Language— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence listing languages, then give one brief reason for learning English and a correct phrase for Arabic proficiency. Use linking words and avoid repetition. Also correct errors like "My mother tongue is Persian" (separate sentence), "I have started learning English" and "I speak Arabic professionally" or "I have professional proficiency in Arabic".

Ví dụ: I speak Persian, which is my mother tongue, and I also speak Arabic at a professional level. I have recently started learning English because it is an international language and important for work and travel.

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation sounds and organize the answer with a topic sentence and one or two supporting reasons using linking words (e.g., "However", "Therefore"). Replace vague phrases with specific ones: "practice regularly", "consistent effort", and correct grammar: "many people", "they make a lot of effort".

Ví dụ: I think learning a new language can seem difficult at first, but with regular practice and determination it becomes manageable. For example, if learners practice speaking and listening every day, they usually improve quickly.

Gợi ý: Give a direct reply and expand with one clear reason. Avoid fillers and correct phrasing: "Japanese and French appeal to me", "to socialize with people from other cultures", "learn about their cultural heritage". Keep answer within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I'm not sure, but I would like to learn Japanese and French in the future because they interest me. Learning them would help me socialize with people from those cultures and understand their traditions and heritage better.

Gợi ý: Structure the answer: give the main reason first (work/study), then add one supporting detail (cultural integration or job prospects). Correct grammar: "Since I immigrated to London and I am studying nursing, I need to pass the IELTS exam", "learning the language helps me integrate and find better jobs". Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like "They, they interest favorite".

Ví dụ: I learn English because I moved to London and, as a nursing student, I need to pass the IELTS exam for my studies and registration. In addition, speaking English helps me understand local culture and improves my chances of finding a good job.

× I can speak Persian, My mother tongue is Persian.

✓ I can speak Persian; my mother tongue is Persian.

Incorrect capitalization and punctuation: 'My' should be lowercase because it continues the same sentence idea; the original uses a comma splice. Use a semicolon or separate into two sentences to join related independent clauses. Also ensure consistent pronoun reference and sentence flow.

× The other languages that I can speak is Arabic profession in Arabic.

✓ The other language that I can speak is Arabic; I am proficient in Arabic.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice: 'languages' does not agree with singular verb 'is'. Likely intended: 'language' singular. 'profession in Arabic' is incorrect phrase; replace with 'proficient in Arabic' to convey ability. Also use a semicolon or separate sentence for clarity.

× Nowadays I started to learn about English because I believe that English is an international language, so it's really important and plays a significant role in our life.

✓ Nowadays I am learning English because I believe that English is an international language, so it is really important and plays a significant role in our lives.

Tense and plural: 'started to learn' suggests past; 'nowadays' requires present continuous 'am learning'. Also 'life' should be plural 'lives' when speaking generally. Use consistent present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× Actually, I believe that at first it looked to be so difficult for many peoples, but when people, uh, do, uh, lots of things, they, uh, push themselves and, uh, they have lots of efforts, they can, uh, learn it.

✓ Actually, I believe that at first it seemed to be very difficult for many people, but when people do many things, push themselves, and make a lot of effort, they can learn it.

Plural and word choice: 'peoples' is incorrect when referring to people in general; use 'people'. 'Looked to be' is unnatural; 'seemed to be' or 'looked' is better. 'Lots of efforts' should be 'a lot of effort' or 'much effort'. Remove filler words and streamline sentence structure.

× And because, uh, we don't need to lots of talents for it, uh, we have to be determined.

✓ And because we do not need a lot of talent for it, we have to be determined.

Preposition and article use: 'need to lots of talents' is incorrect. Use 'need a lot of talent' or 'do not need many talents'. Also remove unnecessary 'to' after 'need' and use correct articles.

× I don't know what the future holds, uh, but Japanese and French are my cup of tea.

✓ I do not know what the future holds, but Japanese and French are my cup of tea.

Minor: contraction 'don't' acceptable but formal correction to 'do not' is stylistic. No tense error but remove filler 'uh'. Sentence otherwise correct.

× I like to learn these kinds of languages because I, I can't, uh, socialize with other people, with other culture and I can learn a lot from their, uh, cultures, their national heritage and the like.

✓ I like to learn these languages because I can socialize with people from other cultures, and I can learn a lot from their cultures, national heritage, and customs.

Pronoun and noun agreement: 'can't socialize' contradicts context; likely meant 'can'. 'Other culture' should be plural 'other cultures' or 'people from other cultures'. 'Their, cultures' punctuation error—remove comma. Clarify meaning and use consistent plural forms.

× Since I immigrated to London, my major is nursing, uh, I need pass, uh, IELTS exam.

✓ Since I immigrated to London, my major is nursing, and I need to pass the IELTS exam.

Verb form and infinitive: 'need pass' is incorrect; use 'need to pass'. Also join clauses correctly with 'and'. Maintain present tense 'is nursing' because major is current.

× The other thing that I like to mention when, uh, we, uh, immigrate in other country, we have to know about their culture, their national heritage and also their behavior.

✓ Another thing I want to mention is that when we immigrate to another country, we have to learn about its culture, national heritage, and customs.

Preposition and pronoun agreement: Use 'immigrate to another country' not 'immigrate in'. 'Their' is vague—use 'its' to refer to 'another country' or rephrase to 'people from that country'. 'Behavior' is better expressed as 'customs' or 'social behaviors'.

× So learning language help us to learn about their behavior.

✓ So learning the language helps us learn about their behavior.

Subject-verb agreement and article: Missing article 'the' before 'language'; verb should be 'helps' to agree with singular noun. Also 'learn about their behavior' is vague—specify 'their' refers to people of that country.

× They, they interest favorite and also we can find better job when we know about their.

✓ They become more interested in us, and we can also find better jobs when we learn about them.

Pronoun and vocabulary: Original is unclear. 'Interest favorite' is nonsensical; likely meant 'they will be more interested in us'. 'Better job' should be plural 'better jobs'. 'Know about their' is incomplete; use 'learn about them' or 'their culture'. Clarify pronoun references and correct verb forms.