Language— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、冗長な言い回しや言いよどみが多く、語順や語彙の選択を改善できます。トピック文で直接応え、その後で1〜2文の具体例（どのように練習しているか、どのくらいの頻度か）を付けると良いです。つなぎ言葉（for example, because, so）を使って論理を明確にし、繰り返しを避けて流暢さを高めましょう。発音のために "English" を重ねて言わないように練習してください。

Ví dụ: I speak Japanese as my native language, and I am also studying English. For example, I practice English every day by listening to podcasts and speaking with language exchange partners, so my speaking is gradually improving.

Gợi ý: 答えは理由を述べていますが、言いよどみと曖昧な表現（"mother tone"）が目立ちます。まず明確なトピック文で答え（Yes, I do.）、次に具体的な理由を1〜2点示してください（発音・文法・語彙の違いなど）。接続詞（because, for example, especially）を使って論理をつなぎ、専門的で自然な語彙（"mother tongue"）を使いましょう。短くても流れの良い2〜3文が理想です。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I find learning a new language difficult because its pronunciation and grammar are very different from my mother tongue. For example, English vowel sounds are hard for me to hear and reproduce.

Gợi ý: 意欲が伝わりますが、繰り返しや言いよどみが多いです。まず簡潔な肯定（Yes, I would.）と目的（to understand K-pop and Korean media）を述べ、その後に具体的な学習方法や期間の予定を付けると良いです。接続語（so, because, in order to）を自然に使い、"Korean" や "K-pop" の表現を正確にしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to learn Korean in the future because I am very interested in K-pop and Korean dramas. In order to understand the songs and shows without subtitles, I plan to study vocabulary and take weekly conversation lessons.

Gợi ý: 理由は明確ですが、冗長でフィラー（uh）が多いです。トピック文で直接答え（I learn English to...）を示し、続けて具体例（travel, work, making friends）を二つ挙げると説得力が増します。語彙を整理して冗長な語（"language word"）を避け、自然な表現（"a very useful language"）を使いましょう。

Ví dụ: I learn English to communicate with people from around the world. For example, I use English when I travel and when I join international online communities, so it helps me make friends and find information.

× Definitely, I always use Japanese but uh, I want to improve my English English so I practice.

✓ Definitely, I always use Japanese, but I want to improve my English, so I practice every day.

The sentence mixes present simple habits and a general desire. 'I practice' alone is ambiguous; add 'every day' or 'regularly' to show habitual action. Also remove duplicate 'English' and add commas for clarity. Use present simple for routines: 'I practice every day.'

× I also practice English every day.

✓ I also practice English every day.

This sentence is already correct in present simple for a habitual action; no change needed. Keep present simple to describe routines.

× Yes, uh, it is very difficult for me to learn the new language because it is very different from the uh, umm, my mother tone.

✓ Yes, it is very difficult for me to learn a new language because it is very different from my mother tongue.

Use the indefinite article 'a' with 'new language' because you are speaking generally, not about a specific language. 'Mother tone' is incorrect collocation; the correct term is 'mother tongue.' Remove extra fillers and the possessive 'my' should directly modify 'mother tongue.'

× Yes, uh, I want to learn new language in the future, especially I want, I would like to learn the Korean because I'm, I'm very interested in K pop culture.

✓ Yes, I want to learn a new language in the future. In particular, I would like to learn Korean because I'm very interested in K-pop culture.

Use the article 'a' with 'new language' when speaking generally. Do not use 'the' before 'Korean' when referring to the language; say 'learn Korean.' Simplify redundant phrases ('especially I want, I would like') and use 'in particular' to connect ideas. Hyphenate 'K-pop' as standard.

× So by learning the Korean, I want to understand the, uh, what people say.

✓ By learning Korean, I want to understand what people say.

Do not use 'the' before languages (no 'the Korean'). Remove unnecessary articles 'the' before 'what people say.' Keep simple structure: 'By learning Korean, I want to understand what people say.'

× Uh, because I want to communicate with uh, all around the world people.

✓ Because I want to communicate with people all around the world.

The phrase order is incorrect: 'people all around the world' is the natural order. Put 'people' before the modifying phrase 'all around the world.' This corrects word order and preposition placement.

× Uh, English is uh, very uh, useful language word because it is the most common, common language around the world.

✓ English is a very useful language because it is the most common language in the world.

Use the article 'a' before 'very useful language.' Remove the extra word 'word' and the duplicated 'common.' Use the preposition 'in the world' rather than 'around the world' or use either but be consistent. Simplify to 'the most common language in the world.'