Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，句子结构不完整，表达不自然。建议回答时注意句子完整性，避免断句，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually celebrate my birthday with my family because it helps us become closer and creates lasting memories. These moments are very special to me.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用简单清晰的句子，注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

Ví dụ: When I was young, I always had a birthday party. My parents supported me and provided balloons and snacks to make the party fun.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和不自然的表达，且部分词汇使用不当。建议简洁明了地表达观点，注意语法和词汇的准确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is important because it allows me to spend time with loved ones and strengthen our relationships.

Gợi ý: 回答中断句不完整，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: I think the most important birthday to celebrate varies by person. For example, my 18th birthday was very special to me, while my parents might value their own 18th birthdays more.

× The first one is that. Make us closer.

✓ The first one is that it makes us closer.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不通顺。应将两个句子合并，补充主语和谓语，使句子完整。

× The Cigna benefits that it can create lasting memories.

✓ The second benefit is that it can create lasting memories.

原句中“Cigna”应为“second”，且句子结构不完整，缺少谓语。应使用正确的序数词并补充完整句子。

× These two benefits make differences.

✓ These two benefits make a difference.

短语“make differences”不符合英语习惯，应使用固定搭配“make a difference”，表示“产生影响”。

× I always do wish default party on my birthday and my parents always supported me in doing in what I wanted when I was yeah and wanted to party.

✓ I always wished to have a party on my birthday, and my parents always supported me in doing what I wanted when I was young and wanted to party.

时态错误，“do wish”应为过去式“wished”，且句子中“default party”应为“a party”，另外“when I was yeah”应为“when I was young”，句子结构混乱需调整。

× Not only did they try to stormy, they even give me Blues and the snacks to make it happen.

✓ Not only did they try to support me, they even gave me balloons and snacks to make it happen.

“try to stormy”错误，应为“try to support”，且“give”时态应为过去式“gave”，“Blues”应为“balloons”，且“the snacks”前不需要定冠词。

× Yes, I think it is a great chance to share time with people who loves you and.

✓ Yes, I think it is a great chance to share time with people who love you.

“people”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“love”，且句子末尾多余的“and”应删除。

× At best, they always made me deeply fucj connected with people I love and add.

✓ At best, they always made me feel deeply connected with people I love.

句子中“fucj”应为“feel”，“add”无意义且多余，应删除，句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× If so, connection between us get closer.

✓ If so, the connection between us gets closer.

缺少冠词“the”，主谓不一致，“connection”是单数，谓语动词应为“gets”。

× Well I think people choices can vary depending on their age, personal experiences and.

✓ Well, I think people's choices can vary depending on their age, personal experiences, and region.

“people choices”应为所有格“people's choices”，句子末尾不完整，应补充“region”使句子完整。

× Region for example my answer would be my 18th birthday, but for my parents may be the answer would be the 18th birthday.

✓ For example, my answer would be my 18th birthday, but for my parents, maybe the answer would be their 18th birthday.

句子结构混乱，缺少逗号分隔，且“may be”应合并为“maybe”，“the 18th birthday”应明确指代“their 18th birthday”。