Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容完整，但开头有语法错误，且部分表达不够简洁。建议注意句子结构，避免多余词汇，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: On my birthday, I usually have a meal with my close friends or classmates because it has become a tradition. After dinner, we often play games or just hang out, which makes me feel happy and relaxed. This way of celebrating is very special to me.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，且内容不连贯。建议加强语法基础，注意时态一致，避免句子残缺，表达时尽量完整清晰。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I usually didn't have big birthday parties. My family would cook a delicious homemade meal, such as fish and rice. Sometimes, I received small but thoughtful gifts like dolls or toys.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法和词汇错误，表达不够清晰。建议注意时态和词汇的正确使用，句子结构应完整，避免拼写错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is very important because it gives me a chance to reflect on my achievements over the past year. It also allows me to set new goals and have hope for the future. Moreover, it is a good opportunity to connect with my family and friends.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清且有语法错误，逻辑不够连贯。建议理清思路，使用恰当的连接词，注意语法和词汇的准确性。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I don't think there is one particular birthday that is the most important in China. However, many families place great importance on celebrating their grandparents' birthdays because it shows respect and gratitude towards the elderly.

× After dinner, we often play games or just hang out together, which always make me feel very happy and relaxed.

✓ After dinner, we often play games or just hang out together, which always makes me feel very happy and relaxed.

主语是单数的which，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式makes，而不是make。

× You were young. When I was a kid, I usually don't have big birthday parties in stand.

✓ When I was a kid, I usually didn't have big birthday parties instead.

句子描述过去的习惯，助动词和动词应使用过去式，don't应改为didn't，且stand应为instead。

× My family would cook a delicious homemade meal, such as during the fish and rice.

✓ My family would cook a delicious homemade meal, such as fish and rice.

介词during用法错误，表示“在……期间”，此处不合适，应直接列举食物。

× And sometimes I receive small but thoughtful gives like doors or toys.

✓ And sometimes I receive small but thoughtful gifts like dolls or toys.

gives用法错误，应为名词gifts；doors应为dolls，表示玩偶。

× Also the.

✓ Also, there were other small celebrations.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。

× You were young.

✓ When you were young.

句子不完整，缺少连接词when，表示时间状语从句。

× Yes, I think class celebrating my birthday is very important, because it gave me a chance to reflect on what I have achieved in the last year.

✓ Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is very important, because it gives me a chance to reflect on what I have achieved in the last year.

class多余且错误，应删除；时态应保持一致，gave改为现在时gives。

× Is also allowed me to send knew gross and have power hope for dreams for the future, or moreover, is a good opportunity to connect with my family and friends.

✓ It also allows me to set new goals and have hope for dreams for the future; moreover, it is a good opportunity to connect with my family and friends.

缺少主语it，knew gross错误，应为set new goals，时态和语法错误需修正。

× Honestly, I don't think there is one particular birthday itself.

✓ Honestly, I don't think there is one particular birthday that is more important than others.

句子表达不完整，缺少定语从句，需补充完整表达。

× Is considerate most important in China?

✓ It is considered most important in China.

缺少主语it，动词形式错误，应为被动语态considered。

× Uh, maybe in Manning families they place grace importance on celebrating their grandparents birthday becauses show respect and gratitude for the older people.

✓ Uh, maybe in many families they place great importance on celebrating their grandparents' birthdays because it shows respect and gratitude for the older people.

Manning应为many，grace应为great，becauses应为because，grandparents应加所有格，动词单复数需一致。