Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid unrelated or confusing phrases.

Ví dụ: On my birthday, I usually buy new clothes and look for nice gifts. I enjoy celebrating with my family and friends, which makes the day special.

Gợi ý: Your response is difficult to understand due to grammar mistakes and unclear phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific details about your childhood birthday celebrations, using linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I celebrated my birthday with parties. I invited my friends, family, and close relatives to join the celebration, which was always fun and memorable.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows your opinion but is hard to understand due to grammar and unclear phrases. Express your opinion clearly with a topic sentence, then explain why it is important, using linking words and specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is important to celebrate my birthday because it allows me to spend quality time with my family and friends. Celebrations help me feel appreciated and happy.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to clearly state whose birthday is most important to celebrate in China, and provide reasons or examples to support your answer.

Ví dụ: In China, I think the most important birthday to celebrate is the Lunar New Year, which is like a birthday for the whole country. Families gather to celebrate and wish for good luck.

× But nobody Berkeley that I usually do on my birthday.

✓ But nobody knows what I usually do on my birthday.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject-verb-object structure and uses an unclear word 'Berkeley'. The corrected sentence provides a clear subject 'nobody', verb 'knows', and object 'what I usually do on my birthday', making the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× Different kinds of buying a cloth and explore nice gifts.

✓ I usually buy clothes and explore nice gifts.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a subject and proper verb forms. The correction adds the subject 'I' and uses the verbs 'buy' and 'explore' in the correct form to complete the sentence.

× When I am young and I do want my birthday of of.

✓ When I was young, I wanted to celebrate my birthday.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'am' and 'do want' to describe past events. The correction changes the tense to past ('was', 'wanted') to match the time frame indicated by 'when I was young'. Also, 'of of' is unclear and removed.

× Different kinds of her party with the world, my friends and in my family and close relatives.

✓ I had different kinds of parties with my friends, family, and close relatives.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction provides a clear subject 'I', verb 'had', and objects 'parties with my friends, family, and close relatives' to form a complete and meaningful sentence.

× Friends, family to celebrate together.

✓ Friends and family celebrated together.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a verb. The correction adds the verb 'celebrated' and connects 'friends' and 'family' with 'and' to form a complete sentence.

× Yes of course it is important for me to celebrate my birthday becauses in my birthday I one of the DIS celebrate and enjoy are spending time with our family and my friends.

✓ Yes, of course it is important for me to celebrate my birthday because on my birthday I celebrate and enjoy spending time with my family and friends.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'becauses' should be 'because'; 'in my birthday' should be 'on my birthday'; 'I one of the DIS celebrate' is unclear and removed; 'are spending' is corrected to 'spending'; 'our family' changed to 'my family' for consistency. The correction fixes conjunction use and overall sentence clarity.

× Abby, I am not interesting in a China indeed you can call me on celebrating China and I think is the most important to celebrate in China and I think it is a like.

✓ Actually, I am not interested in China. Indeed, you can call me uninterested in celebrating in China, and I think it is not the most important to celebrate in China.

The original sentence misuses prepositions ('interesting in' should be 'interested in'), has unclear phrases ('call me on celebrating China'), and lacks clarity. The correction replaces 'interesting' with 'interested', clarifies the meaning, and corrects preposition use to improve grammar and comprehension.