Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用错误较多，建议练习简单句型表达生日活动，避免语法错误，并使用恰当的连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: On my birthday, I usually celebrate with my parents and grandparents. We watch TV together and listen to birthday songs. Then, I make a wish for my future. Finally, we enjoy the birthday cake as a family.

Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，建议使用简单明了的句子描述过去的生日习惯，并注意时态和连词的使用。

Ví dụ: When I was young, I used to blow out all the candles on my birthday cake at once. I believed that if I did, my wish would come true. However, my parents told me to enjoy the moment slowly because it was special.

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但句子稍显重复，建议丰富词汇，使用更多连接词使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe celebrating my birthday is important because it allows me to reflect on the past year. Moreover, it is a special day to spend quality time with my family and friends as I grow one year older.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议学习如何清晰表达国家生日的重要性，使用准确的词汇和完整句子。

Ví dụ: In China, the most important birthday to celebrate is the country's birthday, known as National Day. It marks the founding of the People's Republic of China and is celebrated on October 1st every year.

× Are you really celebrate the first day with my parents and grandparents?

✓ Do you really celebrate the first day with your parents and grandparents?

句子中使用了错误的动词形式“Are you really celebrate”，正确的疑问句应使用助动词“do”加动词原形，且“my”应改为“your”以符合提问对象。

× TV are seeing birthday sounds for me too impressed their wishes and then I'll make my own wishes for my future and your heels.

✓ I watch birthday shows on TV and am very impressed by their wishes, and then I'll make my own wishes for my future and your health.

原句中“TV are seeing birthday sounds”表达不清且语法错误，应改为“I watch birthday shows on TV”。“too impressed their wishes”缺少介词，应为“impressed by their wishes”。“your heels”应为“your health”。

× So we all enjoyed the birthday cake together.

✓ So we all enjoy the birthday cake together.

根据上下文，描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“enjoy”，而非过去时“enjoyed”。

× When I was young I had like 2 value out the candles before cutting the birthday cake.

✓ When I was young, I used to blow out the candles before cutting the birthday cake.

“had like 2 value out the candles”语法错误且表达不清，应改为“I used to blow out the candles”。

× I believe that if I can bail out the candles at once, my birthday wish will come true.

✓ I believe that if I can blow out the candles at once, my birthday wish will come true.

“bail out the candles”是错误搭配，应为“blow out the candles”。

× But my parents? Told me that don't do that because it's a very special moment for me.

✓ But my parents told me not to do that because it's a very special moment for me.

“parents?”中问号不合适，应去掉；“told me that don't do that”语法错误，应为“told me not to do that”。

× Yes, I think it is very important for me to celebrate my birthday because it's a day to reflect on the past year and spend time with my family and friends in the special day.

✓ Yes, I think it is very important for me to celebrate my birthday because it's a day to reflect on the past year and spend time with my family and friends on this special day.

“in the special day”介词使用错误，应为“on this special day”。

× I know that I grow one year older.

✓ I know that I have grown one year older.

描述已经发生的变化，应使用现在完成时“have grown”，而非一般现在时“grow”。

× The most important birthday is definitely the country's birthday in China, which is a national day or two per first in that day.

✓ The most important birthday is definitely the country's birthday in China, which is National Day on October 1st.

“or two per first in that day”表达不清且错误，应改为“on October 1st”以准确表达日期。

× It means the founding of the People's Republic country, people with very.

✓ It means the founding of the People's Republic of China, and people celebrate it very much.

原句结构混乱且不完整，应补充完整句子，使其表达清晰。