Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ваша відповідь містить граматичні помилки та деякі незрозумілі фрази, наприклад, "party in my favorite pop". Спробуйте використовувати більш точні слова та структуру речень, а також додати зв'язки між ідеями для кращої логіки.

Ví dụ: Usually, I have a small party to celebrate my birthday. Last year, I held the party at my favorite pub. I drank some beer and played card games with my friends.

Gợi ý: Ваша відповідь коротка і містить помилки, наприклад, "parents date parties". Спробуйте чітко сформулювати речення, використовуючи правильні дієслова, і додати більше деталей для покращення змісту.

Ví dụ: When I was young, my parents organized birthday parties for me. I invited all my friends, and we had a lot of fun together.

Gợi ý: Ваша відповідь не зовсім зрозуміла через граматичні помилки і неправильне використання слів, наприклад, "feeling of your impotence". Спробуйте чітко висловити свою думку, використовуючи правильні слова і структуру речень.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think celebrating birthdays is important because it can improve your mood and make you feel valued and happy.

Gợi ý: Ваша відповідь містить багато граматичних помилок і незрозумілих фраз, наприклад, "Mars are awake mother of family". Спробуйте висловити свою думку більш чітко і логічно, використовуючи прості речення.

Ví dụ: I'm not sure whose birthday is the most important in China, but I think it might be the birthday of the family elder, who is respected by everyone.

× Usually I can do a small party for me.

✓ Usually I have a small party for myself.

The modal verb 'can' is incorrectly used here to express a habitual action. Instead, the simple present tense 'have' should be used to indicate a regular activity. Also, 'for me' should be 'for myself' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun.

× Also I drink some beer and wait some card games.

✓ Also I drank some beer and played some card games.

The sentence describes a past event, so the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Drink' should be 'drank' and 'wait' is incorrect here; it should be 'played' to describe participating in card games.

× When I was young my parents date parties for me.

✓ When I was young, my parents organized parties for me.

The verb 'date' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'organized' to describe arranging parties. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause for clarity.

× I called all my friends and I just had fun.

✓ I called all my friends, and I just had fun.

A comma is needed before the conjunction 'and' to separate two independent clauses properly.

× I think it's so important because it because celebrating your birthday.

✓ I think it's so important because celebrating your birthday is meaningful.

The original sentence is incomplete and repetitive. It needs a main verb after 'because' to complete the clause. Adding 'is meaningful' clarifies the reason.

× Influence on your mood and so on your feeling of your impotence.

✓ It influences your mood and also affects your feelings of importance.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it a fragment. Also, 'impotence' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'importance'. The sentence is corrected to a complete sentence with proper pronouns and verbs.

× I really don't know who's birthday is most important is in China.

✓ I really don't know whose birthday is the most important in China.

'Who's' is a contraction for 'who is' and is incorrect here; the possessive pronoun 'whose' should be used. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× But I can assume that the most important birthday is China is birthday of Mars are awake mother of family.

✓ But I can assume that the most important birthday in China is the birthday of the mother who is the head of the family.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. It needs restructuring for clarity and correct word choice. 'Mars are awake mother' is incorrect and replaced with 'mother who is the head of the family' to convey the intended meaning.