Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但语言不够自然，有语法和用词错误，如“not running someone”应为“not a person”，“center of rotation”应为“center of attention”，“through a party”应为“throw a party”。建议多练习常用表达，避免语法错误，并使句子更简洁流畅。

Ví dụ: I am not the type of person who enjoys being the center of attention, so I usually keep my birthday low-key. I prefer to have a nice dinner with my family at a fancy restaurant and keep things simple.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“Buy me a birthday cake”应为“bought me a birthday cake”，“Gift that year with a pair of basketball shoes”应为“I received a pair of basketball shoes as a gift that year”。建议注意时态一致，句子结构完整，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: When I was young, my parents usually held a family party for me. They bought me a birthday cake and even prepared a surprise. I remember when I was 12, I was crazy about basketball, so I received a pair of basketball shoes as a gift that year.

Gợi ý: 回答中有明显的语法和表达错误，如“celebrating birthday is very important to me animal”不通顺，且“what's the animal”无意义。建议加强语法基础，避免无关词汇，表达时注意逻辑和连贯性。

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't think celebrating my birthday is very important. Since I graduated from high school and moved away from my parents, I rarely have big celebrations. Usually, I just go out for a nice dinner with some close friends.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法混乱，表达不清晰，如“Is how do you say for sure”，“Specially your mouse in Chinese culture with believe your birthday”等句子不通顺。建议多练习句子结构，使用正确的连接词，表达观点时要清晰具体。

Ví dụ: I'm not sure, but I believe that parents' birthdays are the most important to celebrate in China. In Chinese culture, a birthday is special because it also honors the mother who went through a lot to bring you into the world. Therefore, many people think celebrating their parents' birthdays is very meaningful.

× Well I'm not running someone who enjoys being the center of rotation so I don't like to make it a big deal or through a party or anything.

✓ Well, I'm not a person who enjoys being the center of attention, so I don't like to make it a big deal or throw a party or anything.

这里“I'm not running someone”用法错误，应该用名词短语“a person who”来表达“我不是那种人”。另外，“center of rotation”应为“center of attention”，意思是“关注的中心”。“through a party”应为“throw a party”，表示“举办派对”。

× I usually go to a fancy restaurant with my family and job.

✓ I usually go to a fancy restaurant with my family and friends.

这里“job”用法不当，应该是“friends”表示“朋友”，因为和家人一起去餐厅通常是和朋友或家人，而不是“工作”。

× My parents usually hold a family party for me.

✓ My parents usually held a family party for me.

句子描述的是过去的习惯，应该用过去时“held”而不是现在时“hold”。

× Buy me a birthday cake and even prepared birthday surprise for me.

✓ They bought me a birthday cake and even prepared a birthday surprise for me.

句子缺少主语，应补充“they”，动词“buy”应使用过去式“bought”，并且“birthday surprise”前应加冠词“a”。

× I remember when I was 12 years old. I'm crazy about basketball and my poster.

✓ I remember when I was 12 years old. I was crazy about basketball and my poster.

前半句是过去时，后半句应保持时态一致，使用过去时“was crazy”，而不是现在时“I'm crazy”。

× Gift that year with a pair of basketball shoes.

✓ That year, I was gifted a pair of basketball shoes.

原句缺少主语和谓语，结构不完整，需改为完整句子。

× Actually, I don't think celebrating birthday is very important to me animal.

✓ Actually, I don't think celebrating birthdays is very important to me anymore.

“celebrating birthday”应为复数形式“celebrating birthdays”，且“animal”应为“anymore”，表示“不再”。

× Since I graduated from high school and moved away from my parents, I really have big celebrations.

✓ Since I graduated from high school and moved away from my parents, I haven't really had big celebrations.

句子描述过去到现在的情况，应该用现在完成时否定形式“haven't had”，而不是现在时“have”。

× Usually I just go out for a nice dinner with some close friends, so I don't attach much importance to what's the animal.

✓ Usually I just go out for a nice dinner with some close friends, so I don't attach much importance to it anymore.

“what's the animal”无意义，应改为“it anymore”，表示“不再重视”。

× Is how do you say for sure, but I believe that parents birthdays are the most meaningful ones.

✓ I'm not sure how to say it for sure, but I believe that parents' birthdays are the most meaningful ones.

句子缺少主语和谓语，且“parents birthdays”应加所有格“parents' birthdays”。

× Is. Specially your mouse in Chinese culture with believe your birthday is also the day your mom went through a lot to bring you into the world.

✓ Especially in Chinese culture, we believe your birthday is also the day your mom went through a lot to bring you into the world.

句子结构混乱，“Is.”无意义，应改为“Especially in Chinese culture”，并调整句子顺序使其通顺。

× So some people even think their parents instead of exciting gift.

✓ So some people even think their parents deserve gifts instead of receiving exciting gifts themselves.

句子不完整且表达不清，需补充谓语和宾语，使句意明确。