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Part 1

Giám khảo

What do you usually do on your birthday?

Thí sinh

I usually celebrate my birthday in on my birthday and maybe my parents gave me some cakes and then ate with my family. I always get my new uh present for my family.

Giám khảo

What did you do on your birthday when you were young?

Thí sinh

Uh, maybe My parents set up my birthday table for dinner and my mom cooks my favorite food for my birthday and eat some cakes after dinner.

Giám khảo

Do you think it is important for you to celebrate your birthday?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think so because celebrating my birthday is the big event, uh, once a year and my parents won't stay and I can know my ages and for teenagers it's important than others.

Giám khảo

Whose birthday do you think is the most important to celebrate in China?

Thí sinh

Actually, I'm not sure about China maybe celebrating China New Year. It is for China's king, for China in China's most important person. Uh, in family. I think the father is.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

What do you usually do on your birthday?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Answer ga chotto fukuzatsu de, bunpou to eigo no shizen-sa ni mondai ga arimasu. Motto seikaku ni, junsoku ni kotaeru koto ga taisetsu desu. Tatoeba, 'I usually celebrate my birthday with my family. My parents give me a cake, and we eat it together. I also receive presents from them.' to iu fuu ni, motto rikai shi yasui kotoba wo tsukatte kudasai.

Ví dụ: I usually celebrate my birthday with my family. My parents give me a cake, and we eat it together. I also receive presents from them.

What did you do on your birthday when you were young?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, bunpou to eigo no shizen-sa wo takameru hitsuyou ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'When I was young, my parents set up a birthday table for dinner. My mom cooked my favorite food, and we ate cake after dinner.' to iu fuu ni, junsoku de wakariyasui kotoba wo tsukatte kudasai.

Ví dụ: When I was young, my parents set up a birthday table for dinner. My mom cooked my favorite food, and we ate cake after dinner.

Do you think it is important for you to celebrate your birthday?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Kotae wa sukoshi fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui tokoro ga arimasu. Motto meikaku ni setsumei shite, rikai shi yasui kotoba wo tsukatte kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is important because it happens only once a year. It helps me remember my age and spend time with my parents. For teenagers, it is more important than for others.' to iu fuu ni kotaete kudasai.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is important because it happens only once a year. It helps me remember my age and spend time with my parents. For teenagers, it is more important than for others.

Whose birthday do you think is the most important to celebrate in China?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Kotae wa fumei de, shizen de rikai shi yasui eigo de kotaeru hitsuyou ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'I'm not sure about birthdays in China, but I know that Chinese New Year is very important. In families, I think the father's birthday is important to celebrate.' to iu fuu ni, motto meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

Ví dụ: I'm not sure about birthdays in China, but I know that Chinese New Year is very important. In families, I think the father's birthday is important to celebrate.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I usually celebrate my birthday in on my birthday and maybe my parents gave me some cakes and then ate with my family.

I usually celebrate my birthday on my birthday, and maybe my parents give me some cakes and then eat with my family.

The phrase 'in on my birthday' contains an incorrect preposition; 'on' is the correct preposition to use with specific days. Also, the verb tense should be consistent in present tense to match 'usually'.

Past tense issue

× I usually celebrate my birthday in on my birthday and maybe my parents gave me some cakes and then ate with my family.

I usually celebrate my birthday on my birthday, and maybe my parents give me some cakes and then eat with my family.

The verbs 'gave' and 'ate' are in past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so present tense 'give' and 'eat' should be used.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I always get my new uh present for my family.

I always get a new present from my family.

The phrase 'my new uh present for my family' is incorrect; it should be 'a new present from my family' to indicate the source of the gift.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Uh, maybe My parents set up my birthday table for dinner and my mom cooks my favorite food for my birthday and eat some cakes after dinner.

Maybe my parents set up my birthday table for dinner, and my mom cooks my favorite food for my birthday and eats some cakes after dinner.

The pronoun 'My' should be lowercase 'my'. Also, the verb 'eat' should be 'eats' to agree with the singular subject 'my mom'.

Third person singular issue

× Uh, maybe My parents set up my birthday table for dinner and my mom cooks my favorite food for my birthday and eat some cakes after dinner.

Maybe my parents set up my birthday table for dinner, and my mom cooks my favorite food for my birthday and eats some cakes after dinner.

The verb 'eat' should be 'eats' to agree with the third person singular subject 'my mom'.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, I think so because celebrating my birthday is the big event, uh, once a year and my parents won't stay and I can know my ages and for teenagers it's important than others.

Yes, I think so because celebrating my birthday is a big event once a year, and my parents won't stay, and I can know my age. For teenagers, it's more important than for others.

The phrase 'the big event' should be 'a big event' as it is not a specific event. 'My ages' is incorrect; 'my age' is correct. Also, 'important than others' should be 'more important than for others' to make a proper comparison.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Actually, I'm not sure about China maybe celebrating China New Year.

Actually, I'm not sure about China; maybe celebrating Chinese New Year.

The phrase 'China New Year' is incorrect; the correct term is 'Chinese New Year'. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two ideas.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× It is for China's king, for China in China's most important person.

It is for China's king, the most important person in China.

The phrase 'for China in China's most important person' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'the most important person in China'.

Sentence structure errors

× Uh, in family. I think the father is.

In a family, I think the father is the most important.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. It should be combined into a complete sentence with proper structure.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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