Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar, such as subject-verb agreement. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'some kind of cake' by specifying the type of cake. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Usually, I don't do anything special on my birthday because I'm not very particular about it. However, my husband and daughter are more enthusiastic; they often bring a chocolate cake, and we cut it together to celebrate.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and grammar, and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Be more specific about the special food and use linking words to make the answer coherent.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I wasn't very conscious about birthdays either. I used to bring chocolates to school and distribute them to my classmates. Additionally, my mother would go to the temple to pray for my well-being and prepare a special meal, such as rice pudding, for me.

Gợi ý: Use more natural expressions and correct word forms, for example, 'I'm not very eager' and 'I feel awkward'. Also, link your ideas clearly to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think it's very important for me to celebrate my birthday. I'm not very eager about birthday celebrations and prefer to keep them modest. In fact, if someone throws a grand party for me, I usually feel a bit awkward.

Gợi ý: Avoid vague and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure are needed for clarity.

Ví dụ: Honestly, I don't know much about this topic. However, I believe that in Chinese culture, children's birthdays are considered very important and are celebrated grandly. Additionally, birthdays of historical figures who have significantly influenced the culture might also be celebrated.

× my husband and daughter is more conscious about that

✓ my husband and daughter are more conscious about that

The subject 'my husband and daughter' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× I would bring some chocolates to schools and just distribute you to my classmates

✓ I would bring some chocolates to school and just distribute them to my classmates

The noun 'schools' should be singular 'school' because the context implies one school. Also, 'you' is incorrect as the object; it should be 'them' referring to chocolates.

× just distribute you to my classmates

✓ just distribute them to my classmates

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here; the correct pronoun to refer to chocolates is 'them'.

× I don't think so. I'm not much eager about my birthday or birthday celebration

✓ I don't think so. I'm not very eager about my birthday or birthday celebration

The phrase 'not much eager' is incorrect; the correct adverb to modify 'eager' is 'very'.

× I feel awkwardness

✓ I feel awkward

The noun 'awkwardness' is incorrectly used; the adjective 'awkward' should be used to describe the feeling.

× Honestly, I don't know more about that one

✓ Honestly, I don't know much about that one

The phrase 'know more about' is incorrect here; 'know much about' is the correct expression to indicate limited knowledge.

× Chinese culture is giving more importance to kids and they are celebrating the kids birthday very grandly I think

✓ Chinese culture gives more importance to kids and they celebrate the kids' birthdays very grandly, I think

The verb 'is giving' should be simple present 'gives' to express a general truth. Also, 'kids birthday' should be plural possessive 'kids' birthdays' to indicate birthdays belonging to multiple kids.

× And moreover that maybe some intuitive birthday whose life significantly impact their culture, maybe their body is very important there

✓ Moreover, there may be some important birthdays of individuals whose lives significantly impact their culture; maybe their role is very important there

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Intuitive birthday' is incorrect; likely meant 'important birthdays'. 'Whose life significantly impact' should be 'whose lives significantly impact' to agree in number. 'Maybe their body is very important' is unclear; 'role' fits better. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.