Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够连贯，且有重复和停顿。建议练习使用完整句子，避免重复词汇，并且用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually celebrate my birthday by having a party with my friends. We play games together and enjoy delicious cake. After that, I blow out the candles and make a wish.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子回答问题，并且补充具体细节，使内容更丰富。

Ví dụ: When I was young, my family did not have the habit of celebrating birthdays. We thought it was not a special day for children, so we usually did not have parties or celebrations.

Gợi ý: 表达中有语法和用词错误，且部分句子不通顺。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，表达观点时要清晰连贯。

Ví dụ: I don't think celebrating my birthday is very important. For me, it is just an ordinary day, and I prefer to enjoy everyday life rather than making a big deal out of my birthday.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子表达观点，并且补充具体原因和细节。

Ví dụ: In China, I think celebrating the mother's birthday is very important because mothers take care of the whole family and work hard to support everyone. Therefore, honoring them on their birthday is meaningful.

× I usually play with my friends and we have a party to share my uh, happiness and uh, play some games and uh.

✓ I usually play with my friends and we have a party to share my happiness and play some games.

句中“play some games and uh”后多余的“uh”应去掉，且句子结构应简洁。这里主要是多余词语的问题，属于句子结构错误。

× She has a cake and blew out the candles to have wish.

✓ She had a cake and blew out the candles to make a wish.

描述过去的事情，动词时态应为过去时，“has”应改为“had”。另外，“have wish”应为“make a wish”，表达更准确。

× When I was young, my family don't have this habit to celebrate breakfast.

✓ When I was young, my family didn't have this habit of celebrating birthdays.

描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时态，“don't have”应改为“didn't have”。另外，“celebrate breakfast”应为“celebrating birthdays”，语义更准确。

× Because this is birthday is not a good day for young children.

✓ Because birthdays are not a good day for young children.

句子结构不完整且重复，“this is birthday is”应改为“birthdays are”，使句子通顺且语法正确。

× If we have celebrate this day, the child may be.

✓ If we celebrate this day, the child may be affected.

“have celebrate”结构错误，应为“celebrate”。句子不完整，需补充谓语使句意完整。

× I think per SE the common day for me and I want to use every day to have a casual item.

✓ I think it's just a common day for me and I want to use every day to do casual things.

“per SE”应为“just”，表达更自然。“have a casual item”表达不当，应改为“do casual things”。

× I don't want something too special for me.

✓ I don't want anything too special for me.

“something”在否定句中通常用“anything”更合适，表达否定含义。

× I think the mother's is important person to celebrate in China because mothers always afford to care about everyone in the family and they always have fathers and child to relieve their stress and.

✓ I think mothers are the most important people to celebrate in China because they always take care of everyone in the family and have fathers and children to relieve their stress.

“the mother's is important person”结构错误，应为“mothers are the most important people”。“afford to care about”表达错误，应为“take care of”。“child”应为复数“children”。