Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh dùng từ lóng như 'wanna'. Bạn nên thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng ý với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cách bạn tổ chức tiệc sinh nhật.

Ví dụ: On my birthday, I usually invite my friends to my house because I want to throw my own birthday party. In addition, I buy a birthday cake and blow out the candles with my friends. We often play games and enjoy delicious food together, which makes the day very special.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'wanna girls party'. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cách bạn tổ chức hoặc cảm nhận về sinh nhật khi còn nhỏ.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I usually asked my mom to help me celebrate my birthday. I liked having a party with my female friends, and I felt very proud on my special day because everyone wished me well.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích lý do tại sao bạn nghĩ việc tổ chức sinh nhật quan trọng hoặc không. Sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I think celebrating my birthday is important because it is a chance to reflect on the past year and spend time with loved ones. However, as I have grown up, I sometimes prefer to celebrate quietly or not at all.

Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng nên dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể mở rộng thêm lý do tại sao sinh nhật 18 tuổi quan trọng.

Ví dụ: In my country, I think the 18th birthday is the most important to celebrate because it marks the transition to adulthood. It is a special occasion when young people gain new rights and responsibilities.

× On my birthday I often invite my friends come to my house because I wanna throw my own birthday party.

✓ On my birthday I often invite my friends to come to my house because I wanna throw my own birthday party.

The verb 'invite' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to come' rather than the bare verb 'come'. This is a common structure: 'invite someone to do something'.

× When I was a kid, I usually ask my mom for celebrating my birthday because you know, I wanna girls party and like when when it was on my birthday, I was very proud of myself.

✓ When I was a kid, I usually asked my mom to celebrate my birthday because, you know, I wanted a girls' party and when it was my birthday, I was very proud of myself.

The sentence is about past habits, so the verb 'ask' should be in the past tense 'asked'. Also, 'for celebrating' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to celebrate'. 'Wanna' should be 'wanted' to match past tense. 'Girls party' should be 'girls' party' to show possession. The phrase 'like when when it was on my birthday' is redundant and corrected to 'when it was my birthday'.

× When I was a kid I usually ask my mom for celebrating my own birthday, but every now and then when I grow up, I think it's not really any chance so for myself.

✓ When I was a kid I usually asked my mom to celebrate my own birthday, but now and then, as I have grown up, I think there is not really any chance for myself.

The verb 'ask' should be in past tense 'asked' to match 'When I was a kid'. 'For celebrating' should be 'to celebrate'. The phrase 'every now and then when I grow up' is awkward; corrected to 'now and then, as I have grown up'. 'It's not really any chance so for myself' is unclear and corrected to 'there is not really any chance for myself'.

× All in my country, I think that the 18th birthday because it's like a mark that you will become an adult.

✓ In my country, I think the 18th birthday is the most important because it's like a mark that you become an adult.

The phrase 'All in my country' is incorrect; 'In my country' is correct. The sentence lacks a verb after 'I think that the 18th birthday'; added 'is the most important'. 'You will become' changed to 'you become' for general truth. The definite article 'the' is correctly used before '18th birthday'.