Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct phrases like 'my closed ones' to 'my close ones'.

Ví dụ: Usually, I spend my birthday with my parents and close friends because I prefer a quiet celebration rather than going to a party.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and complete your sentences fully. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific details to enrich your response.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I usually spent my birthday with my family and relatives because I did not have many friends to celebrate with at that time.

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating the same ideas and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect your points and express your opinion clearly and naturally.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe it is important to celebrate my birthday because it reminds me of my special day and allows my loved ones to show their affection through wishes and gifts.

Gợi ý: Try to answer directly and clearly. Avoid unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. If you are unsure, you can say so politely and add a general comment about important birthdays in China.

Ví dụ: I am not very familiar with birthdays celebrated in China, but I believe that birthdays of important historical figures, such as freedom fighters, might be celebrated there.

× Usually on my birthday I used to spend my time with my parents and maybe with my friends because I'm a person who would love to spend my time with my family and my closed ones and I'm not OK or comfortable with spending or going out for a party in my birthday.

✓ Usually on my birthday I spend my time with my parents and maybe with my friends because I'm a person who loves to spend my time with my family and my close ones and I'm not comfortable going out for a party on my birthday.

The phrase 'used to spend' is incorrect here because the question asks about usual present habits, so present simple tense 'spend' is appropriate. Also, 'would love' should be 'loves' to match the present habitual action. 'Closed ones' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'close ones'. 'I'm not OK or comfortable with spending or going out for a party in my birthday' is awkward; it should be 'I'm not comfortable going out for a party on my birthday'. The preposition 'on' is used with 'birthday'.

× Uh, I think that I used to spend my birthday, uh, with my family and relatives when I was young because at that time, I don't think that I have friends, uh, with whom I can hang out with. So I think most of the time of my birthday would be.

✓ Uh, I think that I used to spend my birthday with my family and relatives when I was young because at that time, I didn't have friends with whom I could hang out. So I think most of the time I spent my birthday with them.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. Since the time referred to is in the past ('when I was young'), past tense should be used consistently: 'didn't have' instead of 'don't think that I have'. Also, 'with whom I can hang out with' is redundant; 'with whom I could hang out' is correct. The last sentence is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'So I think most of the time I spent my birthday with them.'

× Yes, I think so because I think that it is important for me to celebrate my birthday because there would not be any other person or an individual who would remember my birthday each and every year and wish me happy birthday or greet me with a present. So it's important for me to remember and celebrate my.

✓ Yes, I think so because I believe it is important for me to celebrate my birthday since there is no one else who will remember my birthday every year and wish me happy birthday or give me a present. So it's important for me to remember and celebrate it.

The use of 'would' is incorrect here; 'will' or present simple 'is' is appropriate to express general truths or habitual actions. The sentence 'there would not be any other person' should be 'there is no one else'. Also, the last sentence is incomplete; 'celebrate my' should be 'celebrate it'.

× I don't know whose birthday is most important to celebrate in China because as an Indian citizen I have no much access or connections in China. So I think that the important celebrate important birthday that that celebrated in China would be some of their freedom fighter development.

✓ I don't know whose birthday is most important to celebrate in China because as an Indian citizen I do not have much access or connections in China. So I think that the important birthdays celebrated in China would be those of their freedom fighters.

The phrase 'no much access' is incorrect; it should be 'not much access'. The sentence 'the important celebrate important birthday that that celebrated in China' is ungrammatical and unclear; it is corrected to 'the important birthdays celebrated in China'. Also, 'some of their freedom fighter development' is unclear and corrected to 'those of their freedom fighters' to make sense in context.