Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复词汇，并且使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Usually, I throw a party and invite some friends. At the party, we have a big birthday cake, and I blow out the candles while making a wish.

Gợi ý: 时态使用不准确，'have'应改为过去式'had'。另外，'It's really a plus'表达不自然，建议用更具体的描述。

Ví dụ: When I was young, I always had dinner at Pizza Hut with my parents. It was a special and happy time for us.

Gợi ý: 回答较简短，建议增加具体原因或感受，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Absolutely yes, because a birthday is an annual celebration that reminds me of my growth and achievements. It is very special to me.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

Ví dụ: I think the 18th birthday is the most important to celebrate because it marks a significant milestone. After turning 18, young people become adults and start to face society independently.

× Usually I will throw a party and invite some some my some friends and on my birthday party I will have a big birthday cake and I will blow the candles and make a wish.

✓ Usually I will throw a party and invite some of my friends, and at my birthday party I will have a big birthday cake and I will blow out the candles and make a wish.

句中“some some my some friends”重复且结构混乱，应改为“some of my friends”表示“我的一些朋友”。此外，介词“on my birthday party”应改为“at my birthday party”，因为“party”作为事件地点用“at”。“blow the candles”应为“blow out the candles”，表示吹灭蜡烛。

× When I was young, I always have dinner in Pizza Hut with my parents. It's really a plus.

✓ When I was young, I always had dinner at Pizza Hut with my parents. It was really a plus.

句子描述过去的习惯动作，谓语动词应使用过去时态“had”而非现在时“have”。“in Pizza Hut”应改为“at Pizza Hut”，表示在某个具体地点。后半句“It’s really a plus”描述过去情况，应改为“It was really a plus”。

× I think 18th birthday is worth celebrating because it is an important milestone in their life.

✓ I think the 18th birthday is worth celebrating because it is an important milestone in their life.

“18th birthday”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指某个具体的生日。