Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and linking words. For example, say "I usually celebrate my birthday with a small family gathering at home or by dining out. Having a special dinner followed by cake is a cherished moment where we share stories and laugh together."

Ví dụ: I usually celebrate my birthday with a small family gathering at home or by dining out. Having a special dinner followed by cake is a cherished moment where we share stories and laugh together. Family celebrations are an important part of my birthday.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "When I was a child, my parents always organized special outings on my birthday, such as going to the zoo, museums, or movies. This was a great way to escape the usual routine and made the trips exciting and unique."

Ví dụ: When I was a child, my parents always organized special outings on my birthday, such as going to the zoo, museums, or movies. This was a great way to escape the usual routine and made the trips exciting and unique.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar and clarity issues. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words. For example, "I don't consider it essential to celebrate my birthday. As I have grown older, the significance of birthday celebrations has diminished. Also, organizing a party seems more troublesome than it's worth, so I prefer to spend time quietly with my family."

Ví dụ: I don't consider it essential to celebrate my birthday. As I have grown older, the significance of birthday celebrations has diminished. Also, organizing a party seems more troublesome than it's worth, so I prefer to spend time quietly with my family.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains some incorrect phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and accurately. For example, "In China, honoring and respecting parents is very important, so celebrating their birthdays is especially meaningful. It is a way to show our appreciation for their sacrifices and the care they have given us."

Ví dụ: In China, honoring and respecting parents is very important, so celebrating their birthdays is especially meaningful. It is a way to show our appreciation for their sacrifices and the care they have given us.

× I would like to celebrate my birthday with my family as a small gathering at home or dine out with have a special dinner follow by cake is also a cherished moment to share stories and laugh together.

✓ I would like to celebrate my birthday with my family as a small gathering at home or dine out with a special dinner followed by cake, which is also a cherished moment to share stories and laugh together.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'have' after 'dine out with' and lacks proper structure. 'Have' should be omitted or replaced with 'a special dinner'. Also, 'follow' should be in past participle form 'followed' to correctly describe the sequence. Adding 'which is' clarifies the sentence structure. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× My parents always organize a special outings on my birthday as I was a child, such as going go to the juice, orders museums, orders movies.

✓ My parents always organized special outings on my birthday when I was a child, such as going to the zoo, museums, and movies.

The phrase 'a special outings' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'outings'; it should be plural without 'a'. 'Going go to the juice' is incorrect; it should be 'going to the zoo'. 'Orders museums, orders movies' is unclear and likely meant 'museums and movies'. Also, 'organize' should be past tense 'organized' to match 'when I was a child'.

× My parents always organize a special outings on my birthday as I was a child, such as going go to the juice, orders museums, orders movies.

✓ My parents always organized special outings on my birthday when I was a child, such as going to the zoo, museums, and movies.

The action happened in the past, so the verb 'organize' should be in past tense 'organized' to maintain tense consistency with 'when I was a child'.

× My parents always organize a special outings on my birthday as I was a child, such as going go to the juice, orders museums, orders movies.

✓ My parents always organized special outings on my birthday when I was a child, such as going to the zoo, museums, and movies.

The phrase 'going go to the juice' is incorrect; 'going' should be followed by 'to' plus the place. 'Juice' is likely a typo for 'zoo'. Correcting to 'going to the zoo' is appropriate.

× So this way is a great way to escape from the norms and makes the trips very exciting and unique.

✓ So this is a great way to escape from the norms and make the trips very exciting and unique.

'This way is' is correct, but 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject 'trips'. Also, 'this way is a great way' is redundant; 'this is a great way' is clearer.

× I don't consider it essential to celebrate my birthdays.

✓ I don't consider it essential to celebrate my birthday.

'Birthdays' is plural but the context is general; singular 'birthday' is more appropriate here to refer to the concept of celebrating one's birthday.

× As I have age, the significance of my birthday celebrations has diminished.

✓ As I have aged, the significance of my birthday celebrations has diminished.

The phrase 'As I have age' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'As I have aged' to indicate the passage of time.

× I also think this the offers to organize a birthday party since more troubles than is worth, so I would like to spend time with my family.

✓ I also think that organizing a birthday party causes more trouble than it is worth, so I would like to spend time with my family.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and structure. 'This the offers to organize' is incorrect. Rephrasing to 'organizing a birthday party causes more trouble than it is worth' clarifies meaning and corrects pronoun and article usage.

× I think seeing China's honorings and respecting parents is paramount, so to celebrate their birthdays is a waste.

✓ I think honoring and respecting parents in China is paramount, so celebrating their birthdays is important.

'Seeing China's honorings' is incorrect; it should be 'honoring'. Also, 'is a waste' contradicts the intended meaning. Changing to 'is important' aligns with the respect expressed.

× To express our appreciations and videos priority is also our way of thanking them for their contributions to raise us and sacrifice their times.

✓ Expressing our appreciation and giving priority is also our way of thanking them for their contributions in raising us and sacrificing their time.

'Appreciations' should be singular 'appreciation'. 'Videos priority' is unclear; likely meant 'giving priority'. 'Raise us' should be 'raising us' and 'sacrifice their times' should be 'sacrificing their time'. These corrections improve clarity and grammar.