Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少具体细节。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并补充具体的生日活动内容。

Ví dụ: On my birthday, I usually spend a quiet day with my family. We don't have big parties, but we enjoy a simple meal together and share some small gifts.

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达含糊。建议直接说明小时候的生日活动，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: When I was young, my mother always made my birthday special by preparing a small party. She wanted me to have happy memories, so we invited close friends and family.

Gợi ý: 回答较为简单，表达不够自然，有语法错误。建议用更自然的表达方式，并补充原因和感受。

Ví dụ: I don't think my birthday is very important, but I appreciate when my friends congratulate me. I usually thank them and sometimes give small gifts in return.

Gợi ý: 回答内容基本正确，但表达不够流畅，有语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I believe the most important birthday to celebrate in China is the nation's founding day. The government organizes a week-long holiday for citizens to commemorate this special occasion.

× I never heard any celebrations or parties in my birthday like common people because birthday for me is just a suffering day for my mother.

✓ I have never heard of any celebrations or parties on my birthday like common people because my birthday is just a suffering day for my mother.

这里使用了过去时态“heard”，但句意表达的是从过去到现在的经历，应该用现在完成时“have never heard”。另外，介词“in my birthday”应改为“on my birthday”，因为表示具体日期时用“on”。

× I never heard any celebrations or parties in my birthday like common people because birthday for me is just a suffering day for my mother.

✓ I have never heard of any celebrations or parties on my birthday like common people because my birthday is just a suffering day for my mother.

“heard”后面搭配介词应为“heard of”，表示听说过某事。表示具体日期时，应该用介词“on”而不是“in”。

× Actually, my mother see the birthday as the memorable and unforgettable day for me because she wants this appearance.

✓ Actually, my mother sees the birthday as a memorable and unforgettable day for me because she wants this experience to be remembered.

主语是第三人称单数“my mother”，动词应加-s，变为“sees”。另外，“appearance”用词不当，应改为“experience”，并补充完整句意。

× Actually, my mother see the birthday as the memorable and unforgettable day for me because she wants this appearance.

✓ Actually, my mother sees the birthday as a memorable and unforgettable day for me because she wants this experience to be remembered.

“the memorable and unforgettable day”中“the”使用不当，改为不定冠词“a”，因为这里是泛指生日这一天。

× As I mention, it's not a significant day for me.

✓ As I mentioned, it's not a significant day for me.

这里指的是过去提到的内容，应该用过去时“mentioned”而不是现在时“mention”。

× On my birthday, many of my friends will show their congratulations to me. I will simply thank you, thank them for and give some gifts to them.

✓ On my birthday, many of my friends will show their congratulations to me. I will simply thank them and give some gifts to them.

“thank you”用错了，应该是“thank them”，因为感谢的是朋友们。

× On my birthday, many of my friends will show their congratulations to me.

✓ On my birthday, many of my friends will offer their congratulations to me.

“show congratulations to”不太地道，通常用“offer congratulations to”或“give congratulations to”。

× I will simply thank you, thank them for and give some gifts to them.

✓ I will simply thank them and give some gifts to them.

句中“thank you”错误，应该是“thank them”，且“thank them for”后面缺少宾语，需删去“for”。

× so the government set up a national day around 6-7 days to let the let its citizens to celebrate.

✓ so the government set up a national day holiday lasting around 6-7 days to let its citizens celebrate.

“set up a national day around 6-7 days”表达不清，应改为“set up a national day holiday lasting around 6-7 days”。“let the let its citizens to celebrate”重复且“let”后动词不带to，应改为“let its citizens celebrate”。