Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to make it more coherent. Try to use more precise vocabulary and keep your sentences concise.

Ví dụ: On my birthday, I usually spend the first half of the day having lunch with my family and some relatives. In the evening, I celebrate by partying with my friends.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid vague phrases and provide specific details.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I celebrated my birthday together with my grandmother's because they fall on the same day. We usually gathered with relatives at my grandparents' house to spend time together.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by combining short sentences and using linking words to make it more fluent. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary to express your ideas.

Ví dụ: I don't think celebrating my birthday is very important anymore. Although it used to be significant, now I prefer to spend quality time alone or with my family and close friends.

Gợi ý: Your answer could be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then explain with specific details using linking words. Also, avoid grammatical errors and use appropriate vocabulary.

Ví dụ: In my country, there are no particular individuals whose birthdays are especially important to celebrate. Instead, people focus on anniversaries that are special to the person, often celebrating them in large restaurants with many relatives.

× The first half of the day we we have lunch together, gather together and there might be some relatives and the other half of the day start from the evening I party with my friends.

✓ The first half of the day we have lunch together, gather together and there might be some relatives, and the other half of the day, starting from the evening, I party with my friends.

The sentence has a subject-verb agreement issue with 'start' which should be 'starting' to correctly connect the phrase. Also, the sentence structure is complex and needs commas for clarity. The verb 'start' does not agree with the subject 'the other half of the day' in this context; using 'starting' as a participle phrase is correct.

× My birthday is the same. It was the same as my grandmother's birthday.

✓ My birthday is the same. It is the same as my grandmother's birthday.

The sentence refers to a current fact, so present tense 'is' should be used instead of past tense 'was'. Using past tense here is incorrect because the comparison is still true now.

× We spent the time together with relatives gathering at my grandmother and grandfather house.

✓ We spent time together with relatives gathering at my grandmother's and grandfather's house.

The phrase 'my grandmother and grandfather house' lacks possessive apostrophes. It should be 'my grandmother's and grandfather's house' to indicate possession. Also, 'the time' is better as 'time' in this context.

× I just try to spend quality time with myself or try to spend more time with my family and the closest ones.

✓ I just try to spend quality time by myself or try to spend more time with my family and the closest ones.

The phrase 'spend quality time with myself' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'spend quality time by myself' meaning alone. 'With myself' is not used in this context.

× In my country there is no any special individuals whose birthday is important to celebrate.

✓ In my country there are no special individuals whose birthday is important to celebrate.

The phrase 'no any' is incorrect; it should be either 'no' or 'any' but not both together. Also, 'individuals' is plural, so 'are' should be used instead of 'is'.