Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复（"I always we always"），句子较长且缺少连贯的连接词。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually celebrate my birthday by throwing a party and inviting my friends over. We enjoy hot pot together, then we sing karaoke and play board games to have fun.

Gợi ý: 回答中出现了不相关的句子（"And what is about?"），影响了表达的连贯性。建议直接回答问题，避免无关内容，并且可以增加细节使回答更具体。

Ví dụ: When I was young, my parents always cooked a big homemade meal and made a delicious birthday cake for me. We would celebrate together as a family.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清（"celebrate birthday"应为"celebrating birthdays"，"lost the past"应为"let go of the past"），建议注意语法和用词准确，表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: Of course, I think celebrating birthdays is a good way to bond with my friends and family. It also symbolizes letting go of the past and welcoming a new year in life.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整，句子未结束，缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议完整表达观点，增加具体原因和细节，使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: I think celebrating the elders' birthdays is very important in China because it shows respect and strengthens family bonds.

× As to how I celebrate my birthday, I usually throw a party and invite my friends over for food such as hot pot and after that I always we always see karaoke and play board games to have fun.

✓ As to how I celebrate my birthday, I usually throw a party and invite my friends over for food such as hot pot, and after that, we always sing karaoke and play board games to have fun.

句子中出现了“I always we always see karaoke”，主语和动词不匹配，且动词用法错误。应改为“we always sing karaoke”，主语和动词一致，且动词用法正确。

× Well, when I was very little, I remember my parents used to cook a big homemade meal with a delicious birthday cake on my birthday. And what is about?

✓ Well, when I was very little, I remember my parents used to cook a big homemade meal with a delicious birthday cake on my birthday. And what about that?

“And what is about?”表达不正确，正确表达应为“And what about that?”，表示“那是什么？”或“那是关于什么的？”。这里是固定短语用法错误。

× Of course, I think celebrate birthday is a good way to bond with my friends and families. Meanwhile it means lost the past and welcome my new year it.

✓ Of course, I think celebrating birthdays is a good way to bond with my friends and family. Meanwhile, it means letting go of the past and welcoming my new year.

句中“celebrate birthday”缺少动名词形式，应为“celebrating birthdays”；“friends and families”中“families”应为不可数名词“family”；“lost the past”时态和用词错误，应为“letting go of the past”；“welcome my new year it”多余“it”，应去掉。整体句子需要调整以符合语法和表达习惯。

× I think the elder's birthday is very important for this family. It's a good way to bond with families and.

✓ I think the elder's birthday is very important for this family. It's a good way to bond with family members.

“bond with families”中“families”复数形式不合适，应该用“family members”或“family”表示家庭成员。句尾“and.”不完整，应去掉。