Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but you can improve by using more natural phrasing and avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of "go to a fancy restaurant to have a dinner," you can say "dine at a nice restaurant." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I usually celebrate my birthday with my family by dining at a nice restaurant. Additionally, I sometimes bake my own birthday cake to make the day more special.

Gợi ý: There are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing in your answer. Use past tense consistently when talking about the past, and try to avoid repeating phrases like "when I was young" twice. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I went to a theme park on my birthday because Ocean Park in Hong Kong offers free admission on that day. Therefore, I visited the park almost every year during my childhood.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and contains filler words like "umm." Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid hesitation. Also, use linking words to explain your reasons logically and provide specific details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think celebrating birthdays is very important because daily routines can be boring and predictable. Celebrating my birthday gives me a sense of joy and breaks the monotony of everyday life.

Gợi ý: Your answer is honest but sounds informal and a bit confusing. Avoid using slang like "kinda" and unclear phrases such as "my their self." Try to express your opinion more clearly and politely, and support it with reasons.

Ví dụ: I believe that everyone values their own birthday the most because it is personally meaningful. Therefore, people should appreciate and celebrate their own special day as a way to cherish themselves.

× I usually celebrate my birthday with my family. For example, we will go to a fancy restaurant to have a dinner and I sometimes will also make myself a birthday cake.

✓ I usually celebrate my birthday with my family. For example, we go to a fancy restaurant to have dinner and I sometimes also make myself a birthday cake.

The use of 'will' to describe habitual actions is incorrect. In English, habitual actions are expressed using the simple present tense, not the future tense. Therefore, 'we will go' and 'I sometimes will also make' should be corrected to 'we go' and 'I sometimes also make' respectively.

× When I was young, I go to theme park on my birthday because Ocean Park and Hong Kong provide a free park visit when it's your birthday. So I basically go there every year when I was young.

✓ When I was young, I went to the theme park on my birthday because Ocean Park in Hong Kong provided a free park visit when it was your birthday. So I basically went there every year when I was young.

The sentence describes past events, so the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Go' and 'provide' should be changed to 'went' and 'provided' to match the past time frame. Also, 'theme park' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× When I was young, I go to theme park on my birthday because Ocean Park and Hong Kong provide a free park visit when it's your birthday.

✓ When I was young, I went to the theme park on my birthday because Ocean Park in Hong Kong provided a free park visit when it was your birthday.

The phrase 'theme park' refers to a specific place, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'Ocean Park and Hong Kong' is unclear; it should be 'Ocean Park in Hong Kong' to specify the location.

× Yes, I think celebrating birthday is very important because umm, when you have your daily routine every day, it's very boring and everything is on schedule but celebrating your birthday give you a sense of.

✓ Yes, I think celebrating birthdays is very important because, umm, when you have your daily routine every day, it's very boring and everything is on schedule, but celebrating your birthday gives you a sense of joy.

'Celebrating birthday' should be 'celebrating birthdays' to indicate the general activity. The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'celebrating your birthday'. Also, the sentence was incomplete, so 'a sense of joy' is added to complete the thought.

× I'm kinda a selfish person so of course I think my birthday is most important to celebrate in China because it's most meaningful to me. So I think everyone else should have the same thought. Like people should treasure their own my their self more than others.

✓ I'm kinda a selfish person, so of course I think my birthday is the most important to celebrate in China because it's most meaningful to me. So I think everyone else should have the same thought. Like people should treasure themselves more than others.

The phrase 'their own my their self' is incorrect and confusing. The correct reflexive pronoun here is 'themselves'. Also, 'most important' should be preceded by 'the' to form the superlative correctly: 'the most important'.