Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。過去形と現在形の使い分けを正しくし、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。また、感謝の気持ちを表現する際に、より自然な表現を使うことが重要です。

Ví dụ: I usually hold a party with my friends on my birthday. It is a comfortable time for me, and I use this day to express my gratitude for everyday life.

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の誤りが目立ちます。特に「birthday meals」の使い方や、複数形の誤用に注意しましょう。また、理由を述べる際は、より明確で自然な表現を心がけてください。

Ví dụ: When I was young, I cooked birthday meals with my mother for my family. Making food on my birthday was a way to show daily appreciation.

Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で、意味が伝わりにくいです。主語と動詞の一致、冠詞の使い方に注意し、簡潔で明確な文章を作る練習をしましょう。感謝の気持ちを表す表現も改善が必要です。

Ví dụ: Yes, celebrating my birthday is very important to me. It is a special day to express gratitude to the people around me.

Gợi ý: 文の構造が不明瞭で、意味が伝わりにくいです。主語と述語の関係を明確にし、理由を述べる際は論理的に説明する練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: In China, I think celebrating parents' birthdays is the most important. Most people value their parents deeply, so they make sure to celebrate their birthdays.

× I usually held a party with my friends in my first day.

✓ I usually hold a party with my friends on my birthday.

The sentence uses 'held' which is past tense, but 'usually' indicates a habitual action, so present tense 'hold' is correct. Also, 'in my first day' is incorrect; 'on my birthday' is the proper expression.

× I usually held a party with my friends in my first day.

✓ I usually hold a party with my friends on my birthday.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'on' is used for specific days or dates.

× They are always comfortable for me and my birthday is a suitable day for saying the gratitude of daily life.

✓ They always make me feel comfortable, and my birthday is a suitable day to express gratitude for daily life.

'Comfortable' is an adjective describing feelings, so 'make me feel comfortable' is better. 'Saying the gratitude' is incorrect; 'express gratitude' is the proper phrase.

× I made a birthday meals for my families with my mother.

✓ I made birthday meals for my family with my mother.

'Meals' is plural, so 'a' is incorrect. 'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family.

× I made a birthday meals for my families with my mother.

✓ I made birthday meals for my family with my mother.

'Meals' is plural, so 'a' should be removed. 'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family.

× They're making making meals in my birthday is some kind of expression of the daily Thank you.

✓ Making meals on my birthday is a way to express daily gratitude.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and repetitive ('making making'). The corrected sentence simplifies and clarifies the meaning.

× They're making making meals in my birthday is some kind of expression of the daily Thank you.

✓ Making meals on my birthday is a way to express daily gratitude.

'In my birthday' is incorrect; 'on my birthday' is the correct preposition for days.

× Yes, everything.

✓ Yes, it is very important.

'Everything' is vague and does not answer the question properly; a clear statement about importance is better.

× My birthday is especially important thing for my daily lives.

✓ My birthday is a particularly important day in my daily life.

'Important thing' is awkward; 'important day' fits better. 'Daily lives' should be singular 'daily life'.

× The first day is the suitable day for me to express gratitude to people around us, around me.

✓ The first day of the year is a suitable day for me to express gratitude to the people around me.

'The first day' is vague; specifying 'first day of the year' clarifies. 'Around us, around me' is redundant; 'around me' suffices.

× So the celebrating birthday is important thing for me.

✓ So celebrating birthdays is important to me.

'The celebrating birthday' is incorrect; 'celebrating birthdays' is the correct form. 'Important thing' should be 'important' or 'important to me'.

× As far as I know, celebrating the parents birthday is the most important for them.

✓ As far as I know, celebrating parents' birthdays is the most important for them.

'Parents birthday' should be plural possessive 'parents' birthdays'.

× Their feelings Most people are all their parents, so is required to celebrate their birthday.

✓ Most people care deeply about their parents, so it is important to celebrate their birthdays.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Their feelings Most people are all their parents' is incorrect. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects pronoun use.