Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is heartfelt but needs clearer structure and more natural phrasing. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors to improve clarity.

Ví dụ: On my birthday, I usually spend quality time with my family and friends. First, I receive blessings from my parents and grandparents, which makes me feel grateful. In the evening, I enjoy a party with my friends to celebrate this special day.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Use simple, clear sentences and linking words to explain what you did and why. Also, avoid confusing phrases and be specific about your activities.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked to celebrate my birthday with my friends at a nice place. They always asked me to bring delicious food, which made the party enjoyable for everyone.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is difficult to understand due to grammar and unclear expressions. Use simple sentences and explain your reasons clearly with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think celebrating birthdays is important not only for me but for everyone. It is a special day to remember and appreciate life because one day, everyone will leave this world.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Focus on answering directly, then add specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unnecessary questions and improve sentence clarity.

Ví dụ: In China, I think children's birthdays are the most important to celebrate. This is because kids feel excited to enjoy parties with their friends and spend quality time together.

× I started my day with a blessing from my parents, from God and from my grandparents.

✓ I start my day with a blessing from my parents, from God and from my grandparents.

The question asks about usual activities, so present tense is appropriate. 'Started' is past tense; it should be 'start' to match habitual action.

× In the evening I enjoyed with my friends to giving them party on the best day of my life.

✓ In the evening I enjoy with my friends by giving them a party on the best day of my life.

The verb 'enjoyed' is past tense but the context is habitual, so present tense 'enjoy' is correct. Also, 'to giving' is incorrect; it should be 'by giving' to express the manner of enjoyment.

× When I was young, I always wished a wonderful place with my friends to give them a party because they always ask me to Yummy and delicious baby Brazil on my birthday.

✓ When I was young, I always wished for a wonderful place with my friends to give them a party because they always asked me for yummy and delicious baby Brazil on my birthday.

The verb 'wished' requires the preposition 'for' when followed by a noun phrase. Also, 'ask' should be past tense 'asked' to match the past time frame. 'To Yummy and delicious baby Brazil' is incorrect; it should be 'for yummy and delicious baby Brazil'.

× That's why I did enjoy with them.

✓ That's why I enjoyed with them.

The auxiliary 'did' is unnecessary with 'enjoy' in past tense. Simply use 'enjoyed' to express past action.

× Yes, I think it is important for me but not me, but also to celebrate birthday because it is the best day of life and it remember the person, the one day come everyone will go near the gold.

✓ Yes, I think it is important not only for me, but also to celebrate birthdays because it is the best day of life and it reminds the person that one day everyone will go near the gold.

The phrase 'but not me, but also to celebrate birthday' is incorrect; it should be 'not only for me, but also to celebrate birthdays'. 'It remember' should be 'it reminds' to agree with singular subject. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Do we have national like other countries? China also most important to celebrate their kids birthday because it is the excitement for kids to celebrate their birthday because they want to enjoy with their friends, to give them party and spend their precious time with each other.

✓ Do we have national holidays like other countries? China also finds it most important to celebrate their kids' birthdays because it is exciting for kids to celebrate their birthday, enjoy with their friends, give them parties, and spend precious time with each other.

The sentence is unclear and missing words. 'National' should be 'national holidays'. 'China also most important' needs a verb like 'finds it most important'. 'Kids birthday' should be plural possessive 'kids' birthdays'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.