Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: In your answer, try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use a simple structure: start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words like 'and' or 'then'. For example, say: "I usually celebrate my birthday by inviting my family, relatives, and friends. We have a party and enjoy a beautiful cake together."

Ví dụ: I usually celebrate my birthday by inviting my family, relatives, and friends. Then, we have a party and enjoy a beautiful and fantastic cake together.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition. Make your answer more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence and then adding specific details with linking words. For example, say: "When I was young, I celebrated my birthday by inviting my friends, relatives, and neighbors to my house. We talked and played games together."

Ví dụ: When I was young, I celebrated my birthday by inviting my friends, relatives, and neighbors to my house. We talked and played games together.

Gợi ý: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh' and 'umm'. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, say: "Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is important because it is a wonderful moment to remember my age and reflect on my responsibilities as I grow older."

Ví dụ: Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is important because it is a wonderful moment to remember my age and reflect on my responsibilities as I grow older.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Avoid irrelevant or confusing information. For example, say: "In China, the most important birthday to celebrate is that of Mao Zedong, a great leader who was kind and skillful."

Ví dụ: In China, the most important birthday to celebrate is that of Mao Zedong, a great leader who was kind and skillful.

× What I usually do on my birthday, it's a celebration of and inviting my family's members and relatives and friends, then taking celebrations for my birthday and by and a very beautiful and fantastic cake.

✓ What I usually do on my birthday is celebrate by inviting my family members, relatives, and friends, and having a very beautiful and fantastic cake.

The original sentence has a confusing structure with unnecessary conjunctions and phrases. The corrected sentence uses a clear subject-verb structure and proper listing of people invited, improving clarity and grammatical correctness.

× inviting my family's members and relatives and friends

✓ inviting my family members, relatives, and friends

The phrase 'family's members' is incorrect; 'family members' is the correct plural form. Also, commas are used to separate items in a list for clarity.

× I was doing so much thing when I was young.

✓ I did so many things when I was young.

The past continuous 'was doing' is inappropriate here; simple past 'did' is correct. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' and 'so much' should be 'so many' for countable nouns.

× I was doing so much thing

✓ I did so many things

'Thing' is countable, so it should be plural 'things' and 'so much' is used for uncountable nouns; 'so many' is correct for countable nouns.

× I usually celebrate by inviting my kiddie friends and relative parts and also neighbors and friends to my house.

✓ I usually celebrate by inviting my childhood friends, relatives, neighbors, and friends to my house.

The phrase 'relative parts' is incorrect; 'relatives' is the correct term. Also, 'kiddie friends' is better expressed as 'childhood friends' for clarity and correctness.

× And we were talk talking and then.

✓ And we were talking and then...

The phrase 'talk talking' is incorrect; the correct present participle form is 'talking'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for verb form.

× it's realized me to celebrate my birthday

✓ it reminds me to celebrate my birthday

The verb 'realized' is incorrectly used; 'reminds' is the correct verb to express the intended meaning.

× and it's realized me to celebrate my birthday and, uh, make my memories better to know about my age

✓ and it reminds me to celebrate my birthday and make better memories to understand my age

The pronoun 'me' is correct, but the verb and phrase structure is incorrect. 'Make my memories better to know about my age' is awkward; 'make better memories to understand my age' is clearer.

× and also about my, umm, about my responsibility for the coming next years

✓ and also about my responsibility for the coming years

The phrase 'coming next years' is redundant; 'coming years' suffices. Also, 'about my, umm, about my' is repetitive and should be simplified.

× that I know I'm grow up and I, I can take more responsibility and I should make.

✓ that I know I am growing up, and I can take more responsibility and I should do so.

The phrase 'I'm grow up' is incorrect; the present continuous 'I am growing up' is correct. The sentence was incomplete; 'I should make' is unclear and corrected to 'I should do so'.

× Are the most important, but I think it's more to celebrate in China is ***** ***** Chang and he was the great leader of China and he he was too skillful and very kind to their people and populations.

✓ The most important birthday to celebrate in China is that of ***** ***** Chang, who was a great leader of China. He was very skillful and kind to his people and population.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. The corrected sentence has proper subject-verb agreement, clearer structure, and correct pronoun use.

× he he was too skillful and very kind to their people and populations.

✓ he was very skillful and kind to his people and population.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrect when referring to a singular person; 'his' is correct. Also, 'too skillful' is changed to 'very skillful' for appropriate emphasis.