Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'especially about'. Also, try to use more natural expressions and linking words to make your answer smoother and more coherent. For example, instead of 'cutting a cake with a standing ovation', you can say 'cutting a cake while my friends and family sing songs for me'.

Ví dụ: I usually celebrate my birthday by cutting a cake while my friends and family sing songs for me. Then, I invite my close friends and family to enjoy delicious dishes together, such as my favorite biryani. This gathering makes me feel happy and appreciated on my special day.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by avoiding repetition ('on on my birthday') and by using linking words to connect ideas more smoothly. Also, try to add more specific details or examples to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I preferred to receive birthday gifts because they created a warm and memorable atmosphere. Moreover, I loved spending quality time with my family and friends, playing games like hide and seek, and enjoying delicious food together. These moments made my birthday very special and joyful.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'the wheel and away of my passing days'. Try to use simpler and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Avoid redundancy and focus on clear reasons why the birthday is important to you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is important to celebrate my birthday because it reminds me of the good memories I have had so far. Also, I enjoy spending time with my family by playing fun games and eating delicious homemade cakes, which always make the day joyful.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains some errors such as 'herding ceremonies' and 'to other his teachings'. Try to use correct vocabulary and linking words to make your answer clearer and more natural. Also, explain briefly what kind of ceremonies or activities are held.

Ví dụ: Well, I think the most important birthday to celebrate in China is that of Confucius, who is considered the father of Chinese culture and philosophy. People commemorate this day with ceremonies and cultural activities that honor his teachings. This celebration is significant because it helps preserve traditional values and promotes respect for education.

× I usually celebrate my birthday by cutting a cake with a standing ovation and uh, some compliments, and especially about the songs from my, uh, friends and family members.

✓ I usually celebrate my birthday by cutting a cake with a standing ovation, some compliments, and especially songs from my friends and family members.

The phrase 'especially about the songs' is incorrect; 'especially songs' is more appropriate here to express emphasis on the songs. Also, 'some compliments, and especially about the songs' is awkward; removing 'about' improves clarity and correctness.

× People commemorate this day by herding ceremonies and cultural activities to other his teachings.

✓ People commemorate this day by holding ceremonies and cultural activities to honor his teachings.

The phrase 'herding ceremonies' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'holding ceremonies'. Also, 'to other his teachings' is incorrect; it should be 'to honor his teachings' to express the purpose of the activities.

× Yes, but these are a special day that helps me remember various memorable moments in my life, for example, the wheel and away of my passing days.

✓ Yes, but this is a special day that helps me remember various memorable moments in my life, for example, the wheel and way of my passing days.

The word 'these' is plural but refers to 'a special day' which is singular, so 'this' should be used. Also, 'away' should be 'way' to make sense in context.

× I also loved celebrating by spending quality time with my family and friends, playing games, and enjoying delicious food together.

✓ I also loved celebrating by spending quality time with my family and friends, playing games, and enjoying delicious food together.

No correction needed here; the sentence is grammatically correct.

× When I was young, I preferred to receive a birthday gift on on my birthday because it created a warm and memorable atmosphere.

✓ When I was young, I preferred to receive a birthday gift on my birthday because it created a warm and memorable atmosphere.

The repetition of 'on' is a typographical error; removing the duplicate 'on' corrects the sentence.