Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は自然ですが、文法的な誤りや表現の不明瞭さがあります。例えば、「share my birthday and my house with my family」は不自然で、「celebrate my birthday at home with my family」などの表現が適切です。また、具体的な活動内容をもう少し詳しく述べると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Usually, I celebrate my birthday at home with my family. We share stories and enjoy each other's company, which makes the day very special for me.

Gợi ý: 時制の使い方に注意が必要です。質問は過去のことを尋ねているため、過去形を使うべきです。また、文が少し冗長で、より簡潔にまとめることが望ましいです。

Ví dụ: When I was younger, I invited my friends to the park. We bought snacks from a store, or sometimes my parents prepared delicious food for us.

Gợi ý: 文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「makes me feel very cared, cherished」は不自然で、「makes me feel loved and appreciated」が適切です。また、「when I grow up」は文脈に合っていません。

Ví dụ: Yes, my birthday is very important to me because celebrating it makes me feel loved and appreciated. It also gives me confidence as I grow older.

Gợi ý: 回答は自然ですが、少し曖昧で具体性に欠けます。質問に対して中国の文化について知らないことを述べるのは良いですが、その後に自分の意見をもっと明確に述べると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I am not familiar with birthday traditions in China, but in Japan, I believe every birthday is important because it celebrates the day a person was born. Therefore, I think all birthdays should be respected.

× I am still young and I invite my friends over and we go to the park.

✓ I am still young and I invite my friends over and we go to the park.

No correction needed here as the sentence correctly uses the present tense to describe habitual actions.

× I am still young and I invite my friends over and we go to the park.

✓ When I was young, I invited my friends over and we went to the park.

The question asks about past actions, so the verbs should be in the past tense to match the context. 'Invite' should be 'invited' and 'go' should be 'went'.

× We go to a store to get something to eat and drink, or my parents prepare something enjoyable and delicious.

✓ We went to a store to get something to eat and drink, or my parents prepared something enjoyable and delicious.

Since the context is about past events, the verbs 'go' and 'prepare' should be in the past tense: 'went' and 'prepared'.

× I think that celebrating my birthday party makes me feel very cared, cherished and I feel really good and strong when when I grow up.

✓ I think that celebrating my birthday makes me feel very cared for, cherished, and I feel really good and strong as I grow up.

The phrase 'feel cared' is incomplete; it should be 'feel cared for'. Also, 'birthday party' is better shortened to 'birthday' here. The phrase 'when when I grow up' is redundant and should be 'as I grow up'.