Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer clearer and more grammatical: start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundant phrases and unclear expressions. Also correct grammar (e.g., tense and articles) and use vocabulary relevant to customs.

Ví dụ: I usually visit a temple on my birthday. For example, I offer food and make merit with my family, and afterwards we have a small meal together to celebrate quietly.

Gợi ý: Organize into a clear topic sentence followed by linked details. Use correct verb forms and connectors (e.g., "then", "after that"). Provide one specific example to make the description vivid.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I used to visit the temple on my birthday. We would offer food to the monks, and then we held a small party at home with relatives, where we ate and sang songs.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence stating your opinion, then support it with two clear reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Avoid filler words and incorrect grammar. Use specific alternatives to "something else" to show clarity.

Ví dụ: I don't think celebrating my birthday is very important to me because birthdays happen every year and I prefer to spend the day doing meaningful activities. For example, I often use the day to volunteer or to travel with close friends instead of having a big party.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly: state your view then explain with two concise reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Fix grammar and use specific vocabulary (e.g., "everyone is equal" rather than vague phrases).

Ví dụ: I think no single person's birthday is more important than others in China because everyone should be treated equally. Therefore, celebrations tend to be personal and family-focused rather than national events.

× On my birthday, I usually go to temples. That's kind of the common thing that Thai people usually do on everybody is give us about the feeling that you share something to order on your body.

✓ On my birthday, I usually go to temples. That's a common thing Thai people do because it gives us the feeling of sharing something with others.

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