Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct tense and articles, and add one or two specific details with linking words. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually celebrate my birthday with a small party at home. I decorate the living room with balloons and fairy lights, and I wear my favorite dress. Also, I invite close family and friends to share a homemade cake, which makes the day special.

Gợi ý: Focus on past tense and coherence: give a clear past-tense topic sentence, use linking words (for example, or then) to sequence events, and include one specific memory or detail to make the answer richer.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, we usually celebrated my birthday at a restaurant. First, we ate a big meal together, and then my parents brought a cake and we sang happy birthday. I remember feeling excited when the waiter brought a chocolate cake with candles.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and stronger reasons: begin with a direct statement (Yes, I do), then offer two concise reasons linked with because/so. Correct grammar (singular/plural, verbs) and avoid repeating phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do think it is important to celebrate my birthday because it gives me a chance to relax and reconnect with family. Also, celebrating marks personal achievements from the past year, so it motivates me to set new goals.

Gợi ý: Be concise and avoid uncertainty: start by acknowledging your perspective, then give a logical, culturally aware answer. Use correct grammar and clearer phrasing; if unsure about China specifically, say so and give a reasonable general example.

Ví dụ: I'm from Vietnam, so I'm not certain about Chinese customs, but I would guess that national leaders' birthdays are treated with official recognition. Alternatively, many people in China may value family elders' birthdays the most, as respecting elders is an important cultural value.

× In my birthday every year, I usually decorate my birthday party and choose my favorite dress to dress in my birthday party with my family and friends.

✓ On my birthday every year, I usually decorate for my birthday party and choose my favorite dress to wear to the party with my family and friends.

Use 'on my birthday' not 'in my birthday' (article/preposition error). Also 'decorate for' or 'decorate the venue' is more natural than 'decorate my birthday party'. Use 'wear' rather than 'dress' when talking about clothes. Avoid repeating 'in my birthday party'.

× I think I like to choose all of that because I want to make it carefully and cannot.

✓ I think I like to choose all of those things because I want to plan it carefully.

Sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'All of that' should be 'all of those things'. 'Make it carefully' is incorrect; use 'plan it carefully'. 'Cannot' is out of place and should be removed or replaced with a clear idea. Keep the sentence concise and logical.

× When I was young, especially when I was in secondary school or maybe primary school, I always went to a restaurant with my family and have A and have a birthday with my family just like that.

✓ When I was young, especially in primary or secondary school, I always went to a restaurant and celebrated my birthday with my family.

Maintain past tense consistently: use 'celebrated' not 'have'. Remove unnecessary repetition and the stray 'A'. Simplify 'in secondary school or maybe primary school' to 'in primary or secondary school'.

× I I really enjoyed that moment and after that my my parents be with.

✓ I really enjoyed those moments, and after that my parents stayed with me.

Remove duplicate words 'I I' and 'my my'. Use plural 'moments' if referring to repeated occasions. 'My parents be with' is ungrammatical; use 'stayed with me' or 'were with me'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and clear object.

× In my opinion, I think yes because I want to celebrate my important day of the year and just enjoyed it with my family and friend.

✓ In my opinion, yes, because I want to celebrate my important day of the year and just enjoy it with my family and friends.

Tense: keep present tense 'enjoy' to match general statement. Use plural 'friends'. Remove redundant 'I think' when starting with 'In my opinion' or keep only one. 'The important day of the year' is okay but 'my important day of the year' is acceptable; ensure verb tense consistency.

× I think that moment will will meaningful in the whole year.

✓ I think that moment will be meaningful for the whole year.

Remove duplicate 'will will'. Add the verb 'be' after 'will'. Use 'for the whole year' rather than 'in the whole year'.

× I think it's really good and can makes me happy.

✓ I think it's really good and can make me happy.

Modal 'can' is followed by the base form of the verb: use 'make' not 'makes'. Ensure subject-verb agreement after modal verbs.

× I born in Vietnam, so I don't know in China who's have the who's have the birthday important, but I think the president of the of the country is the is the most important birthday in the year.

✓ I was born in Vietnam, so I don't know whose birthdays are considered important in China, but I think the president's birthday is the most important of the year.

Use passive past 'I was born' not 'I born'. 'Who's have the' is incorrect — use 'whose birthdays are'. Use possessive 'president's birthday' and 'most important of the year'. Ensure correct verb forms and pronoun use.

× So I think people in China, Chinese will celebrate it a lot.

✓ So I think people in China will celebrate it a lot.

'People in China, Chinese' is redundant. Use either 'people in China' or 'Chinese people'. Remove comma splice; keep sentence simple and natural.