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Part 1

Giám khảo

Where do you go to relax recently?

Thí sinh

Couple of days ago I went. On a park. To. Spend my leisure time and. To have a relax.

Giám khảo

Who do you usually relax with?

Thí sinh

Usually I get relaxed when I. Anne with my friends. Becaused. With your friends you can. Say whatever you want, you can. We what you actually are. You don't have to pretend to be a. That person that you know.

Giám khảo

Do you think listening to music is relaxing?

Thí sinh

Yes, absolutely. I think listening to music is the best way to relax because if you listen melodical songs or retro songs, you will. Have a relaxed mind. Chilled, Yes. Relax mind. Chill to mine, that's all.

Giám khảo

What do you do to relax?

Thí sinh

Usually I do a lot of things to get relaxed, but the thing I do the most is listen to music. Because I'm a music lover. I love to hear all kinds of music, all types of music an. Whenever I hear or listen musics, I get. Relaxed, I feel.

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Part 1

Where do you go to relax recently?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Apni uttor ta aro spostho o shothik vabe bolte paren. Sentence gulo ke shothik bhabe jogajog korte hobe, jate uttor ta natural lage. Apni ekta complete sentence diye shuru korun, tarpor kichu details den. For example, apni bolte paren, "A couple of days ago, I went to a park to spend my leisure time and relax."

Ví dụ: A couple of days ago, I went to a park to spend my leisure time and relax. It was peaceful and helped me forget my daily stress.

Who do you usually relax with?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Apnar uttor e onek bhul ache, jar karone bujhte oshubidha hoy. Apni sentence gulo ke shothik vabe jogajog korte hobe ebong proyojon moto linking words babohar korte hobe. Apni ekta topic sentence diye shuru korun, tarpor karon o details den. For example, "I usually relax with my friends because I can be myself around them."

Ví dụ: I usually relax with my friends because I can be myself around them. We talk freely and enjoy each other's company without any pretence.

Do you think listening to music is relaxing?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Apnar uttor e kichu sentence incomplete o asangjog ache. Apni uttor ta aro spostho o shothik bhabe bolte paren. Linking words babohar kore uttor ke logical korte paren. For example, "Yes, absolutely. I think listening to music is the best way to relax because melodious or retro songs help calm the mind."

Ví dụ: Yes, absolutely. I think listening to music is the best way to relax because melodious or retro songs help calm the mind and reduce stress.

What do you do to relax?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Apnar uttor e kichu sentence incomplete o asangjog ache. Apni uttor ta aro shothik o natural bhabe bolte paren. Linking words babohar kore uttor ke logical korte paren. For example, "Usually, I do many things to relax, but mostly I listen to music because I am a music lover."

Ví dụ: Usually, I do many things to relax, but mostly I listen to music because I am a music lover. Listening to different types of music helps me feel calm and refreshed.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Couple of days ago I went. On a park. To. Spend my leisure time and. To have a relax.

A couple of days ago, I went to a park to spend my leisure time and to relax.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. 'Couple of days ago' needs an article 'A' before 'couple'. 'On a park' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'to a park'. 'To have a relax' is incorrect; 'relax' is a verb, so 'to relax' is correct. Combining these fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× On a park.

To a park.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to going to a place like a park. The correct preposition is 'to' when indicating movement towards a location.

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Couple of days ago I went.

A couple of days ago, I went.

The phrase 'Couple of days ago' requires the indefinite article 'A' before 'couple' to be grammatically correct.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Usually I get relaxed when I. Anne with my friends.

Usually I get relaxed when I am with my friends.

The sentence is incomplete and contains a typo 'Anne' instead of 'am'. The pronoun 'I' needs the verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense correctly.

Incorrect conjunction use

× Becaused. With your friends you can. Say whatever you want, you can. We what you actually are.

Because with your friends, you can say whatever you want; you can be what you actually are.

'Becaused' is incorrect; the correct word is 'Because'. The sentence fragments need to be combined properly using conjunctions and punctuation. 'We' should be 'be' to indicate the verb form.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× You don't have to pretend to be a. That person that you know.

You don't have to pretend to be that person you know.

The sentence is fragmented and contains an unnecessary article 'a' before 'that person'. Removing 'a' and combining the sentence improves clarity.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× If you listen melodical songs or retro songs, you will. Have a relaxed mind. Chilled, Yes. Relax mind. Chill to mine, that's all.

If you listen to melodic songs or retro songs, you will have a relaxed and chilled mind; that's all.

'Melodical' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'melodic'. The phrase 'listen melodical songs' requires the preposition 'to'. The sentence fragments need to be combined properly. 'Relax mind' and 'Chill to mine' are incorrect phrases; 'relaxed and chilled mind' is correct.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× If you listen melodical songs or retro songs, you will.

If you listen to melodic songs or retro songs, you will.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by the object of listening.

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Whenever I hear or listen musics, I get.

Whenever I hear or listen to music, I get relaxed.

'Musics' is incorrect as 'music' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. The sentence was incomplete and needed completion for clarity.

Sentence structure errors

× I get. Relaxed, I feel.

I get relaxed, I feel good.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

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