Part 1
Giám khảo
Where do you go to relax recently?
Thí sinh
Frank would like to go to park because the environment can make me relax.
Giám khảo
Who do you usually relax with?
Thí sinh
I usually go to park by myself. Cast their peaceful moment. Make me. Don't want to say anything.
Giám khảo
Do you think listening to music is relaxing?
Thí sinh
Yeah, sex in case of really good a way to relax I like. Listen to music too.
Giám khảo
What do you do to relax?
Thí sinh
I like play badminton. Course I can. Don't quit.
Where do you go to relax recently?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多,建议使用完整句子直接回答问题,并且注意主语和谓语的一致性。可以增加具体描述来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Recently, I like to go to the park to relax because the fresh air and greenery help me feel calm and refreshed.
Who do you usually relax with?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且句子不完整,建议使用完整句子表达清楚自己的意思,并且避免断断续续的表达。可以说明独自放松的原因。
Ví dụ: I usually go to the park by myself because I enjoy the peaceful moments alone and prefer not to talk during that time.
Do you think listening to music is relaxing?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误且表达不清晰,建议用完整句子表达观点,并且避免无关词汇。可以说明喜欢听什么类型的音乐以及原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think listening to music is a great way to relax. I especially enjoy calm and soothing music because it helps me reduce stress.
What do you do to relax?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,建议用完整句子表达,并且详细说明为什么喜欢打羽毛球以及它如何帮助放松。
Ví dụ: To relax, I like playing badminton because it keeps me active and helps me forget about my worries.
× Frank would like to go to park because the environment can make me relax.
✓ Frank would like to go to the park because the environment can make me relax.
这里缺少冠词“the”,因为“park”是特指的地方,应该用定冠词“the”。
× I usually go to park by myself.
✓ I usually go to the park by myself.
“park”前面缺少定冠词“the”,因为这里指的是特定的公园。
× Cast their peaceful moment.
✓ I enjoy their peaceful moments.
原句结构不完整,缺少主语和谓语,导致句子不通顺。需要补充主语和谓语使句子完整。
× Make me.
✓ It makes me relax.
原句缺少主语和谓语,导致句子不完整。需要补充主语和谓语。
× Don't want to say anything.
✓ I don't want to say anything.
缺少主语“I”,导致句子不完整。
× Yeah, sex in case of really good a way to relax I like.
✓ Yeah, listening to music is really a good way to relax, and I like it.
原句语序混乱,缺少主谓结构,且“sex”应为“listening to music”。需要调整语序并补充完整句子。
× I like play badminton.
✓ I like to play badminton.
动词“like”后面应接不定式“to play”或动名词“playing”,这里用不定式更合适。
× Course I can.
✓ Of course I can.
缺少完整表达,“Course”应为“Of course”,且需要完整句子。
× Don't quit.
✓ I don't quit.
缺少主语“I”,导致句子不完整。