Relax— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Ví dụ: Recently, I usually relax by spending time with my friends because they understand and support me. When I am with them, I feel more comfortable and the atmosphere is cozy.

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Ví dụ: I usually relax with my friends because they understand me well. I think having good friendships is very important in my life and helps me feel comfortable.

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Ví dụ: Actually, it depends on the type of music. When I listen to Lana Del Rey, I feel very relaxed, but classical music is more difficult for me to enjoy.

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Ví dụ: To relax, I usually listen to calm music like Lana Del Rey or read books. Sometimes, I sit with my mom and watch series, which helps me reduce stress in my daily life.

× when I was being with my friends I feeling more comfortable and.

✓ when I was with my friends I felt more comfortable.

The phrase 'was being with' is incorrect; 'was with' is appropriate. Also, 'I feeling' should be 'I felt' to match past tense and correct verb form.

× An atmosphere more cozy.

✓ The atmosphere was cozier.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a verb. It should be a complete sentence with subject and verb.

× Actually I believe I'm a relaxed with my friends and don't anyone anybody understands me how 1 is not my me, my friends and I think it's more crucial things in my life.

✓ Actually, I believe I'm relaxed with my friends and no one else understands me like they do. My friends and I think these are the most crucial things in my life.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and confusing structure. 'I'm a relaxed' is incorrect; 'I'm relaxed' is correct. 'Don't anyone anybody' is incorrect; 'no one else' is appropriate. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× Friendships gives me relax and comfortable atmosphere.

✓ Friendships give me a relaxed and comfortable atmosphere.

'Friendships' is plural, so the verb should be 'give' not 'gives'. Also, 'relax' should be 'relaxed' as an adjective, and 'a' is needed before 'comfortable atmosphere'.

× When I was listening Lana Del Rey, it's I feel this moment very relaxed,

✓ When I was listening to Lana Del Rey, I felt very relaxed at that moment,

The verb 'listening' requires the preposition 'to'. 'It's I feel' is incorrect; it should be 'I felt' to match past tense.

× but when I. Listening. Like classic music, it's been more difficult for me.

✓ but when I listen to classical music, it is more difficult for me.

The sentence fragments and incorrect verb forms need correction. 'Listening' should be 'listen to', and 'it's been' should be 'it is' to match present tense.

× To relax to be honest I usually listening to call music like Corona del Rey or just reading the books and really helps the things.

✓ To relax, to be honest, I usually listen to calm music like Lana Del Rey or just read books, and it really helps.

'Usually listening' should be 'usually listen' to match present tense. 'Call music' is likely a typo for 'calm music'. 'Reading the books' should be 'read books'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× For me it's sit with mom and watching the series.

✓ For me, it's sitting with my mom and watching series.

The phrase 'it's sit' is incorrect; 'it's sitting' is correct. Also, 'mom' should be 'my mom' for clarity.

× And in my daily life I have a more stress and it helps me.

✓ And in my daily life, I have more stress, and it helps me.

'A more stress' is incorrect; 'more stress' is correct without 'a'. The sentence is corrected for grammar and clarity.