Relax— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

Ví dụ: Recently, I prefer to relax at home because it is the most comfortable place for me to relieve stress. I usually play games or chat with my friends on my phone.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法混乱，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并注意时态和语法。

Ví dụ: I usually relax with my family or friends because they are the closest people to me. They always support me and help me forget my worries, making me feel comfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答中有很多拼写和语法错误，表达不清楚。建议使用简单明了的句子，正确拼写单词，并具体说明音乐如何帮助放松。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. Listening to soft or slow songs helps me relax and reduces my stress. It often makes me feel happy and calm.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误严重，句子结构混乱，难以理解。建议使用简单句子，清晰表达放松的具体活动。

Ví dụ: I like to relax by playing games on my phone or browsing social media. Watching funny videos makes me feel peaceful and happy.

× I just I like staying at home to rest because it is the most comfortable area an place for me to relieve stress stress an have fun with playing my mobile phone or chatting on my phone with my friends.

✓ I just like staying at home to rest because it is the most comfortable area and place for me to relieve stress and have fun by playing on my mobile phone or chatting on my phone with my friends.

句中“area an place”应为“area and place”，表示“区域和地方”，需要使用复数形式的连词and连接两个名词。还有“stress stress an have fun with playing”中重复了stress，且“have fun with playing”表达不自然，应改为“have fun by playing”。

× Are usually will ask with my family or my friend because they are the. The closest people with me and they always give me support and help me to forgot the worries and. Give me a comfortable time.

✓ I usually relax with my family or my friends because they are the closest people to me and they always give me support and help me forget my worries and give me a comfortable time.

句中“Are usually will ask with my family or my friend”语法混乱，应为“I usually relax with my family or my friends”，friend应为复数friends。还有“help me to forgot”中forgot应为forget，动词不定式形式。

× Are usually will ask with my family or my friend because they are the. The closest people with me and they always give me support and help me to forgot the worries and. Give me a comfortable time.

✓ I usually relax with my family or my friends because they are the closest people to me and they always give me support and help me forget my worries and give me a comfortable time.

“closest people with me”中介词“with”用错，应为“closest people to me”，表示“最亲近的人”。

× help me to forgot the worries and.

✓ help me forget the worries and

“forgot”是过去式，句中应使用动词原形“forget”与“help”搭配，表示帮助做某事。

× Absolutely listening to Mary Supply, our NB or the slow songs can relax.

✓ Absolutely, listening to Mary Suply, our NB, or slow songs can relax me.

句中“can relax.”缺少宾语，应补充宾语“me”。另外，“Mary Supply, our NB”可能是专有名词，保持不变。

× My brief distress make me feel realizan, I sometimes say. Feel happy.

✓ My brief distress makes me feel relaxed; sometimes I feel happy.

句子结构混乱，“make”应为“makes”与主语一致；“realizan”应为“relaxed”；“I sometimes say. Feel happy.”应合并为“sometimes I feel happy”。

× Ozalj like paying mobile phone on strolling Thursday so show media websites is make me feel most peaceful and make me feel happy while looking at some funny or creepy wheels.

✓ I like playing on my mobile phone and strolling through social media websites; it makes me feel peaceful and happy while looking at some funny or creepy videos.

句中“Ozalj like paying mobile phone on strolling Thursday so show media websites”语法错误，改为“I like playing on my mobile phone and strolling through social media websites”。“show media”应为“social media”，“wheels”应为“videos”。