Cakes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「take it」より「eat them」が自然です。また、「summaries birthday」は誤りで、「my birthday」など具体的に言うと良いでしょう。さらに、文を簡潔にし、冗長な部分を避けることが大切です。

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually eat cakes, but I sometimes eat them on special occasions like anniversaries or my birthday. I prefer drinking alcoholic drinks and usually avoid sweet foods.

Gợi ý: 内容が少し曖昧で、文法的な誤りもあります。例えば、「castella」は日本で有名なケーキで、中国の伝統的なケーキとは異なります。より具体的に中国の伝統的なケーキについて調べて話すか、知らない場合はその旨を明確に伝えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I'm not very familiar with traditional Chinese cakes, but I know that castella is a type of sponge cake introduced by the Portuguese to Asia.

Gợi ý: 回答は内容が明確で良いですが、「I'm not a good at making cakes」は文法的に誤りです。「I'm not good at making cakes」が正しい表現です。また、「scone」はケーキではなく焼き菓子なので、正確な表現を心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: No, I'm not good at making cakes, but when I was in high school, I tried to make scones, which are traditional English baked goods. It was one of my best memories.

Gợi ý: 「umm」などのフィラーは避け、文をスムーズに話す練習をしましょう。また、「on every my birthday」は不自然で、「on every birthday」または「on my birthday」が適切です。文法と語順に注意してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved eating cakes as a child because the sweetness made me very happy. For example, my parents always bought me a chocolate cake on my birthday, which made me feel special.

Gợi ý: 「take cakes」より「eat cakes」が自然です。また、「shape my body」は不自然で、「watch my figure」や「maintain my figure」が適切です。最後の文も意味が不明瞭なので、具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually eat cakes because I want to maintain my figure. However, when I have a special dinner, I always enjoy desserts because they are beautifully prepared and delicious.

× No, I don't usually eat cakes but I sometimes take it, especially on special occasions such as anniversaries or summaries birthday.

✓ No, I don't usually eat cakes but I sometimes eat them, especially on special occasions such as anniversaries or someone's birthday.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because 'cakes' is plural, so the correct pronoun is 'them'. Also, 'summaries birthday' is incorrect; it should be 'someone's birthday' or a similar phrase.

× I've watched some traditional cakes such as castella and that was the traditional cakes delivered from a Portuguese.

✓ I've tried some traditional cakes such as castella, which is a traditional cake introduced by the Portuguese.

The verb 'watched' is incorrect when referring to food; 'tried' or 'eaten' is appropriate. Also, 'delivered from a Portuguese' is incorrect; it should be 'introduced by the Portuguese' or 'brought by the Portuguese'.

× No, I'm not a good at making cakes, but when I was a high school student I tried to make a scone which is one of the traditional English cakes.

✓ No, I'm not good at making cakes, but when I was a high school student I tried to make a scone, which is one of the traditional English cakes.

The phrase 'I'm not a good at' is incorrect; the article 'a' should be removed. Also, a comma is needed before 'which' to introduce the relative clause.

× For example, on every my birthday my parents bought me a chocolate cake so which made me happy.

✓ For example, on every birthday, my parents bought me a chocolate cake, which made me happy.

The phrase 'on every my birthday' is incorrect; it should be 'on every birthday' or 'on my birthday'. Also, 'so which' is incorrect; it should be just 'which' to connect the clause.

× No, I don't usually take cakes because I have to shape my body.

✓ No, I don't usually eat cakes because I have to maintain my body shape.

The verb 'take' is incorrect when referring to eating food; 'eat' is appropriate. Also, 'shape my body' is awkward; 'maintain my body shape' is clearer.

× On the other hand, when I eat special dinner, I always eat sweetness because it is very complicated and beautiful.

✓ On the other hand, when I eat a special dinner, I always eat sweets because they are very elaborate and beautiful.

The phrase 'eat special dinner' needs an article 'a'. 'Eat sweetness' is incorrect; 'eat sweets' or 'have dessert' is correct. Also, 'it is very complicated and beautiful' is unclear; 'they are very elaborate and beautiful' better describes desserts.