Cakes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，有语法错误和用词不当，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love eating cakes, especially chocolate and strawberry ones. However, I rarely get to eat them because we usually have cake only during birthday celebrations.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议明确介绍传统糕点，使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many traditional Chinese cakes, such as mooncakes. We usually eat them during the Mid-Autumn Festival. They come in different flavors, like lotus seed paste and salted egg yolk.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够连贯。建议使用简单句子，注意时态和词汇准确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I can make different kinds of cakes, such as mocha and chocolate cakes. Last month, I followed a recipe from a cookbook to make a strawberry cake.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误多，表达不完整且混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，避免重复和不完整的句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I liked eating cakes when I was a child because I loved sweets like chocolate and strawberry cakes. However, my mother often told me not to eat too many sweets because they are unhealthy.

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但有语法错误和表达不够简洁。建议调整句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I don't like to have desserts after meals because I am currently on a diet. I want to stay fit and healthy, which also helps strengthen my immune system.

× Yes, I love it can, especially chocolate cakes or strawberry cakes.

✓ Yes, I love it, especially chocolate cakes or strawberry cakes.

句中“can”用法错误，表达喜欢不需要使用情态动词“can”，应去掉。

× I have few chances to eat cakes because we always eat the cake only when we need to celebrate someone's birthday.

✓ I have few chances to eat cakes because we always eat cake only when we need to celebrate someone's birthday.

“the cake”应去掉定冠词“the”，且“cake”作为不可数名词时不加复数。

× Yes, there are many traditional Chinese cakes that are quite popular, for example mooncake, which are the common food and for us we will eat them during the meat or the festival and they have a different flavor, for example like mocha and soft egg.

✓ Yes, there are many traditional Chinese cakes that are quite popular, for example mooncakes, which are common foods and we eat them during the Mid-Autumn Festival. They have different flavors, for example mocha and soft egg.

“mooncake”应为复数“mooncakes”，且“meat”应为“Mid-Autumn Festival”（中秋节），句子结构混乱需调整。

× Yes, I can make various favour of cake add for example like mocha cake or chocolate cake.

✓ Yes, I can make various flavors of cake, for example mocha cake or chocolate cake.

“favour”应为复数“flavors”，且“add for example like”表达重复，应简化为“for example”。

× I remember the last time I made the cakes in in last month.

✓ I remember the last time I made cakes was last month.

“in in last month”重复且用法错误，应改为“was last month”。

× I followed the cookbook to make the the strawberry cake.

✓ I followed the cookbook to make the strawberry cake.

“the the”重复，应去掉一个“the”。

× Yes, definitely when I was small, I like eat cake because I have big friend of sweet for example umm chocolate candy and strawberry cake.

✓ Yes, definitely when I was small, I liked eating cake because I was a big fan of sweets, for example chocolate candy and strawberry cake.

时态应与过去时间状语“when I was small”一致，动词应用过去式“liked”，且“like eat”应改为“liked eating”，表达更自然。

× I have big friend of sweet for example umm chocolate candy and strawberry cake.

✓ I was a big fan of sweets, for example chocolate candy and strawberry cake.

“big friend of sweet”表达错误，应为“big fan of sweets”，且“sweet”应为复数“sweets”。

× I but however, my mother always told me I cannot eat too much candy or other sweets like cake because it's.

✓ However, my mother always told me I cannot eat too much candy or other sweets like cake because it's unhealthy.

句子结构混乱，“I but however”重复且不合适，句尾不完整，应补充完整句子。

× Honestly no because nowadays I still on diet therefore I would not eat the dessert after my dinner or lunch because I want to keep fit.

✓ Honestly, no, because nowadays I am still on a diet; therefore, I do not eat dessert after my dinner or lunch because I want to keep fit.

“still on diet”缺少冠词，应为“on a diet”，且“would not”表达习惯应改为一般现在时“do not”，符合现在习惯。

× Also being healthier can help me build the antibody.

✓ Also, being healthier can help me build immunity.

“build the antibody”表达不准确，通常说“build immunity”（增强免疫力），且“antibody”不可数且需具体指代。