Cakes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence addressing the question, then add one specific example and a linking word. Avoid repetition (e.g., "always" and "usually") and fix word choice errors ("tight conscious" → "health-conscious").

Ví dụ: I usually avoid sugary foods because I'm health-conscious, but I occasionally enjoy a small piece of cake, for example on special occasions or when I'm out with friends.

Gợi ý: Answer directly about the question and use correct grammar. If you are not sure about Chinese cakes, say so briefly, then relate to your own tradition with a specific example. Use linking words for clarity.

Ví dụ: I'm not familiar with traditional Chinese cakes. In my Nepali tradition we don't have Chinese-style cakes, but we often serve sweet treats like sel roti and other snacks to welcome guests.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and a brief supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and prepositions, and finish the thought (don't leave sentence fragments). Mention the outcome or feeling about the attempt.

Ví dụ: I'm not a baker, so I usually don't make cakes, but I did try to bake a homemade cake for my son's birthday last month, and it turned out fairly well despite some small mistakes.

Gợi ý: Use past tense when talking about childhood and correct vocabulary. Give a brief comparison between past and present with a reason. Avoid unclear words ("geek", "Superintendent").

Ví dụ: I was a big fan of sweets as a child and often ate cakes, but now I'm more diet-conscious and try to limit sugary foods for health reasons.

Gợi ý: Respond directly and complete the sentence. Provide a short reason or an exception with a linking word. Keep it natural and error-free.

Ví dụ: Not really. I'm not a fan of desserts because I prefer lighter meals, although I sometimes have a small piece of fruit after dinner.

× Honestly, I always I usually avoid sugary items because I am quite tight conscious.

✓ Honestly, I usually avoid sugary items because I am quite health-conscious.

Redundant adverbs 'always I usually' and incorrect adjective 'tight conscious'. Remove redundancy and use correct adjective 'health-conscious'. Use 'usually' to indicate frequency. Ensure hyphenation for compound adjective.

× However, sometimes I also like to try some sweet foods occasionally.

✓ However, sometimes I like to try sweet foods.

Redundant adverbs 'sometimes' and 'occasionally' used together. Also 'some sweet foods' is acceptable but can be simplified. Use a single frequency adverb to be concise.

× I belongs to Nepal so in our tradition we never use Chinese cake or something.

✓ I am from Nepal, so in our tradition we do not use Chinese cakes or similar items.

Verb 'belongs' does not agree with subject 'I'; use 'am from' to express origin. Use plural 'cakes' for general reference and 'do not' for negative present. 'or something' is informal; replace with 'or similar items'.

× However we have a lot of sugary foods and drinks to serve when guest comes.

✓ However, we have a lot of sugary foods and drinks to serve when guests come.

Missing plural on 'guest' — should be 'guests'. Also add comma after 'However' and use present simple 'come' for habitual action.

× Honestly, I am not a Baker or something so I cannot make cakes, but one month ago I tried to homemade cake in my house when my son's birthday.

✓ Honestly, I am not a baker, so I cannot make cakes, but one month ago I tried to make a homemade cake at my house for my son's birthday.

Capitalization error on 'Baker'. 'Or something' is vague and unnecessary. Use 'tried to make' (verb + infinitive) and include article 'a' before 'homemade cake'. Use preposition 'at' and 'for' to indicate purpose.

× It was quite.

✓ It turned out quite well.

Sentence fragment 'It was quite' is incomplete. Add result phrase 'turned out quite well' to convey meaning.

× As a child I am huge fan of geek and other sweet foods.

✓ As a child, I was a huge fan of cake and other sweet foods.

Tense mismatch: speaking about childhood requires past tense 'was'. 'Geek' is likely a typo for 'cake'. Add article 'a' before 'huge fan'.

× However, nowadays I am quite diet conscious and trying to limit my Superintendent.

✓ However, nowadays I am quite diet-conscious and am trying to limit my sugar intake.

Use hyphenated compound adjective 'diet-conscious'. 'Trying' needs auxiliary 'am' for present continuous. 'Superintendent' is incorrect word choice; replace with 'sugar intake' to convey limiting sweets.

× Not really I. I'm not a fan of desserts or any other sweet foods. However.

✓ Not really. I'm not a fan of desserts or other sweet foods.

'Not really I.' is incorrect word order; use 'Not really.' Remove dangling 'However.' which is incomplete. Combine into clear, complete sentences.