Coins— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and avoid repeating words like 'and'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I don't use coins as much now because most transactions are done online through platforms like Google Pay and Paytm in India. Therefore, people rarely carry coins these days.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I don't find coins convenient in India because most products cost more than ₹10, so paper currency is easier to use. Moreover, I often drop and lose coins, which makes them inconvenient for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Make sure to use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, provide clear supporting details with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to collect coins as a child. I had a big piggy bank where I saved coins daily, and once I counted nearly ₹1000, which was my largest collection.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I still carry some coins in a small purse when I go out because they are useful for transactions involving small amounts. However, I usually don't carry a large amount of cash.

× I don't use coins these days as often as I use when I was a child and I think that has to do with the replacement of transactions online through the platform's Google Pay and Paytm in India.

✓ I don't use coins these days as often as I used to when I was a child, and I think that has to do with the replacement of transactions online through platforms like Google Pay and Paytm in India.

The phrase 'as often as I use when I was a child' is incorrect because 'use' should be in the past tense to match 'when I was a child'. The correct form is 'used to' to indicate past habitual action. Also, 'the platform's' should be 'platforms like' to correctly refer to multiple platforms. This correction improves clarity and tense consistency.

× And it is very rare, like people don't usually have coins with them and and buying.

✓ It is very rare; people don't usually have coins with them, and they rarely use them for buying.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'And buying' is a fragment and does not form a complete thought. The correction completes the sentence by clarifying that people rarely use coins for buying, improving sentence structure and clarity.

× I don't think it is convenient to use coins in India because buying when you buy stuff most of the products goes above ₹10 and which the paper cares, the cash becomes more convenient and coins I always drop and lose them so I don't like it.

✓ I don't think it is convenient to use coins in India because when you buy stuff, most products cost more than ₹10, and with paper currency, cash becomes more convenient. I always drop and lose coins, so I don't like them.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement errors such as 'most of the products goes' which should be 'most products cost'. Also, 'which the paper cares' is unclear and likely a misuse of words; it is corrected to 'with paper currency'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, when I was a kid, Quinn was a big thing going collection.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, coin collecting was a big thing.

The phrase 'Quinn was a big thing going collection' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It seems the student meant 'coin collecting was a big thing'. The correction uses the past tense 'was' and correct noun phrase to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× So I remember collecting a big Piggy Bank where I used to put coins on a daily basis and when I check it, I either counted to almost ₹1000 and it was the biggest collection of coins I have made as a kid.

✓ I remember collecting coins in a big piggy bank where I used to put coins daily. When I checked it, I had counted almost ₹1000, and it was the biggest collection of coins I had made as a kid.

The original sentence is run-on and confusing. 'Either counted to almost ₹1000' is incorrect; 'had counted almost ₹1000' is correct past perfect tense to indicate completed action. The sentence is split and restructured for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I still do carry coins these days when I go out. I have a tiny purse where I which is chipped and I I keep coins and there are days when I have to give a transaction that has a fraction in it.

✓ I still carry coins these days when I go out. I have a tiny purse which is chipped, and I keep coins in it. There are days when I have to make transactions that involve fractions.

The phrase 'where I which is chipped and I I keep coins' is grammatically incorrect and confusing. It is corrected to 'which is chipped, and I keep coins in it' for clarity. Also, 'give a transaction' is incorrect; 'make transactions' is the proper collocation. These corrections improve sentence structure and verb usage.