Coins— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cümlenin akıcılığını ve dilbilgisini geliştirin. Kısa cevap verildikten sonra doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kurun, nedeninizi açık ve düzgün dilbilgisiyle belirtin. Bağlaçlar (because, so, therefore) kullanarak neden-sonuç ilişkisini netleştirin. Ayrıca 'the Turkey' yerine sadece 'Turkey' kullanın ve 'cause' yerine 'because' ya da 'due to' tercih edin.

Ví dụ: No, I don't. Because of high inflation in Turkey, coins are worth very little, so people rarely use them for purchases.

Gợi ý: Daha doğrudan ve tam bir cümle kurun. 'That' kelimesi gereksiz; bunun yerine net bir konu cümlesi ile başlayın ve kısa nedenler ekleyin. Bağlaçlarla cümleleri mantıklı şekilde bağlayın ve maksimum 3-4 cümlede kalın.

Ví dụ: Not really. Nowadays in Turkey coins aren't very convenient because they have little value, and most people prefer cards or mobile payments.

Gợi ý: Zaman uyumuna dikkat edin ve cümleleri tamamlayın. 'Went to abroad' yanlış kullanılmış; doğru ifade 'went abroad' olmalı. Ayrıca cümleleri bağlamak için 'so' veya 'because' kullanın ve koleksiyon sürecini kısa ama spesifik detaylarla tamamlayın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents often went abroad and brought back coins from many countries, so I started collecting them and kept them in a small box.

Gợi ý: Daha doğal ifadeler kullanın ve dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin. 'I said before' yerine 'As I mentioned earlier' daha uygun olur. 'Cause' yerine 'because' ve 'I prefer pay with' yerine 'I prefer to pay by' kullanın. 'Meet my phone' yanlış; doğru ifade 'use my phone' veya 'pay with my phone' olmalı.

Ví dụ: No, I don't. As I mentioned earlier, because of high inflation I rarely use coins; I prefer to pay by credit card or with my phone instead.

× Cause of the inflation and economic crisis in the Turkey, you can't buy anything with the coins.

✓ Because of inflation and the economic crisis in Turkey, you can't buy anything with coins.

Use 'Because' instead of 'Cause' for conjunction; 'the Turkey' is incorrect—country names usually do not take 'the'; 'inflation' does not need 'the' here; 'coins' plural without 'the'. Also word order adjusted for clarity.

× No, that nowadays in Turkey, I don't think so.

✓ No, nowadays in Turkey I don't think so.

Remove 'that' which is unnecessary; place 'nowadays' before the clause for natural adverb placement and remove the comma after 'Turkey' for correct flow.

× Have you collected coins when you were a kid?

✓ Did you collect coins when you were a kid?

When referring to a finished time in the past ('when you were a kid'), use simple past ('Did you collect') rather than present perfect ('Have you collected').

× Yes, I did and my parents went to abroad.

✓ Yes, I did, and my parents went abroad.

'To abroad' is incorrect; 'abroad' is an adverb and does not take 'to'. Also add a comma for clarity.

× They bring some national coins from a lot of different countries and I collected and.

✓ They brought some national coins from many different countries, and I collected them.

Use past tense 'brought' to match 'went' and 'collected'; 'a lot of different' is better as 'many different'; sentence was incomplete—add object 'them' and remove trailing 'and'.

× No I don't, I said before cause of the high inflation in Turkey, I don't prefer using coins.

✓ No, I don't. I said before that because of the high inflation in Turkey, I don't prefer using coins.

Add punctuation and 'that' after 'said' to introduce the clause; 'cause' should be 'because' in formal speech. Sentence split into two for clarity.

× I prefer pay with credit card or with meet my phone.

✓ I prefer to pay with a credit card or to use my phone for payments.

Use 'prefer to pay' or 'prefer paying'; include article 'a' before 'credit card'; 'meet my phone' is incorrect—likely 'use my phone'. Rephrase 'for payments' for clarity.