Fishing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence flow. Try to combine ideas smoothly using linking words and avoid repeating similar points.

Ví dụ: Yes, fishing is very popular in my country, especially in coastal regions like Maharashtra. However, since I live in a landlocked state, fishing is not common in my area.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question. To improve, you could add a bit more detail or explanation to enrich your response and use a linking word to connect your ideas.

Ví dụ: No, I don't like eating fish because I'm vegetarian; therefore, I prefer to eat only plant-based foods for health and ethical reasons.

Gợi ý: Your answer provides relevant information but is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating similar points. Also, try to vary your vocabulary to sound more natural.

Ví dụ: No, I have never been to a fish market, but my friends have told me that it can be quite smelly and noisy. Because of this, I don't think I would want to visit one in the future.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and informative, but there is a small grammatical error and some redundancy. Try to correct grammar mistakes and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, fishing is very popular in my country, especially in coastal areas. Many tribal communities depend on fishing as their main source of food and livelihood.

× There are many tribal people who people whose life depend upon fishing and their main source of food is fish.

✓ There are many tribal people whose lives depend upon fishing and their main source of food is fish.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'who people whose' which is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'life' should be plural 'lives' to agree with 'people'. The correct relative pronoun is 'whose' to indicate possession, and 'lives' matches the plural subject 'people'.