Fishing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 文法の誤り（例えば、主語と動詞の一致）を修正し、より自然な表現を使いましょう。また、情報を簡潔にまとめ、冗長な部分を避けることが重要です。例えば、「urban cities like Tokyo, Osaka or Nagoya is some very close to ocean」は「urban cities like Tokyo, Osaka, or Nagoya are close to the ocean」と修正できます。

Ví dụ: Yes, fishing is very popular in Japan because many major cities like Tokyo, Osaka, and Nagoya are close to the ocean. It usually takes about an hour to reach good fishing spots from these cities.

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の誤りを直し、より具体的な理由や説明を加えましょう。例えば、「Many Japanese people include me like sushi or sashimi which the freshness is important」は「Many Japanese people, including me, like sushi or sashimi, where freshness is very important」と表現できます。また、環境問題についてもう少し詳しく述べると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy eating fresh fish. Many Japanese people, including myself, like sushi and sashimi, where freshness is very important. However, recently the amount of fish has decreased due to climate change and environmental issues.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。正しい文法を使い、意味が明確になるように表現を工夫しましょう。また、具体的な経験や感想を加えると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like visiting fresh fish markets, especially when I travel to the countryside. Many cities in Japan have their own fish markets because they are close to the sea. I enjoy exploring these markets and trying local seafood.

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の誤りを修正し、より自然で流暢な表現を使いましょう。例えば、「many male people like to do fishing」は「many men enjoy fishing」と言い換えられます。また、「sea is very near from other cities」は「the sea is very close to cities」と表現できます。

Ví dụ: Yes, fishing is popular in Japan, especially among men. Many cities like Tokyo, Osaka, and Nagoya are close to the sea, so many people enjoy fishing as a hobby.

× Yes, fishing is one of the most popular activities in Japan because urban cities like Tokyo, Osaka or Nagoya is some very close to ocean.

✓ Yes, fishing is one of the most popular activities in Japan because urban cities like Tokyo, Osaka, or Nagoya are very close to the ocean.

The subject 'urban cities like Tokyo, Osaka, or Nagoya' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'some' is unnecessary and 'ocean' should have the definite article 'the'.

× Yes, fishing is one of the most popular activities in Japan because urban cities like Tokyo, Osaka or Nagoya is some very close to ocean.

✓ Yes, fishing is one of the most popular activities in Japan because urban cities like Tokyo, Osaka, or Nagoya are very close to the ocean.

The preposition 'to' is correctly used with 'close', but 'ocean' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the ocean near these cities.

× urban cities like Tokyo, Osaka or Nagoya is some very close to ocean.

✓ urban cities like Tokyo, Osaka, or Nagoya are very close to the ocean.

When listing items, use commas and the conjunction 'or' properly. Commas should separate items in a list, and 'or' should be preceded by a comma in this case.

× Many Japanese people include me like sushi or sashimi which the freshness is important.

✓ Many Japanese people, including me, like sushi or sashimi, for which freshness is important.

The phrase 'include me' is incorrect; it should be 'including me' to indicate that the speaker is part of the group. Also, 'which the freshness is important' is awkward; 'for which freshness is important' is clearer.

× Many Japanese people include me like sushi or sashimi which the freshness is important.

✓ Many Japanese people, including me, like sushi or sashimi, for which freshness is important.

The phrase 'which the freshness is important' is incorrect; it should be 'for which freshness is important' to properly modify 'sushi or sashimi'.

× But recently the amount of fish has decreased because of climate change and environmental.

✓ But recently, the amount of fish has decreased because of climate change and environmental issues.

The word 'environmental' is an adjective and needs a noun to complete the phrase. Adding 'issues' clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I prefer visiting a Fresh Market especially on the travel to the countryside.

✓ Yes, I prefer visiting a fresh market, especially when traveling to the countryside.

'Fresh Market' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun. Also, 'on the travel' is incorrect; 'when traveling' is the correct phrase.

× In Japan many cities have their own Fisher markets because there has is very near for Mandela cities and I prefer visiting there.

✓ In Japan, many cities have their own fish markets because they are very near to major cities, and I prefer visiting them.

'Fisher markets' should be 'fish markets'. 'There has is' is incorrect; it should be 'they are'. 'Mandela cities' seems to be a mishearing or typo; 'major cities' fits better. Also, 'visiting there' should be 'visiting them' to refer to the markets.

× because there has is very near for Mandela cities and I prefer visiting there.

✓ because they are very near to major cities, and I prefer visiting them.

The preposition 'to' is needed after 'near' to indicate proximity. Also, 'visiting there' is less precise than 'visiting them' when referring to markets.

× Yes, in Japan many male people like to do fishing because sea is very near from other cities like Tokyo, Osaka, Hanagua and many people are trying to do it.

✓ Yes, in Japan many men like to go fishing because the sea is very near other cities like Tokyo, Osaka, Hanagua, and many people try to do it.

'Male people' is unnatural; 'men' is better. 'Sea' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Near from' is incorrect; 'near' alone suffices. 'Like to do fishing' should be 'like to go fishing'. 'Are trying to do it' is better as 'try to do it' for habitual action.