Fishing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid filler words and repetition to sound more natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy eating fish, especially Mediterranean varieties because I grew up in Turkey where this cuisine is common. However, I have also tried fish from other countries, like in the UK, but I didn't find them as tasty.

Gợi ý: Focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Provide specific details to enrich your answer and avoid hesitation sounds for a more natural delivery.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have been to fish markets in several countries. For example, in my country, the market is very crowded but offers a wide variety of fresh fish, which I really appreciate because it ensures good taste.

Gợi ý: Improve fluency by reducing hesitation and using complete sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and provide more specific details about how fishing supports the local economy.

Ví dụ: Yes, fishing is very popular in Turkey because the country has many coastlines. Moreover, it plays an important role in supporting the local economy by providing jobs and fresh seafood to communities.

× I really like eating fish, especially from Mediterranean ones because I'm from Turkey, so I got used to that taste and I, I'm really picky about it, but I, I, I have tried some, uh, other countries fish as well in the UK, uh, but I didn't really enjoy.

✓ I really like eating fish, especially Mediterranean ones because I'm from Turkey, so I got used to that taste and I'm really picky about it, but I have tried some fish from other countries as well in the UK, but I didn't really enjoy it.

The phrase 'from Mediterranean ones' is incorrect because 'Mediterranean' is an adjective describing 'fish', so 'Mediterranean ones' is redundant. Also, 'other countries fish' should be 'fish from other countries' to correctly use the quantifier and preposition. Additionally, 'didn't really enjoy' needs an object, so 'it' is added. The corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I have went to fish market in different countries.

✓ I have gone to fish markets in different countries.

The verb 'have went' is incorrect; the correct past participle form of 'go' is 'gone' when used with 'have'. Also, 'fish market' should be plural 'fish markets' to indicate multiple locations. This correction aligns with proper present perfect tense usage and pluralization.

× In my country it is very crowded and busy, but lots of varieties can people find in that market.

✓ In my country, it is very crowded and busy, but people can find lots of varieties in that market.

The word order in 'lots of varieties can people find' is incorrect; the correct order is 'people can find lots of varieties'. This correction fixes the sentence structure and improves readability.

× And also, uh, what I like about it, it's very fresh and the taste is very good.

✓ Also, what I like about it is that it's very fresh and the taste is very good.

The phrase 'what I like about it, it's very fresh' is a comma splice and awkward. Replacing the comma with 'is that' correctly connects the clauses. This improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Fishing is very popular in my country because Turkey has lots of seasides and it's, and also, uh, fishing is one of the, uh, work types that build local economy.

✓ Fishing is very popular in my country because Turkey has lots of seaside areas, and fishing is also one of the types of work that builds the local economy.

The original sentence has redundant conjunctions ('and it's, and also') and awkward phrasing ('work types that build local economy'). The correction removes redundancy, clarifies 'seasides' to 'seaside areas', and corrects subject-verb agreement with 'builds'. This results in a clearer and grammatically correct sentence.