Part 1
Giám khảo
What do you think laughter means to daily life?
Thí sinh
Well, laughings play a crucial role in a daily life. It reduce stress and boost happiness. For example, when I am with my family or friends, sharing jokes makes me more energetic and happy and joyful.
Giám khảo
When was the last time you laughed?
Thí sinh
Well, it was the time of last weekend when I won't add this name with my friends to watch the world's funniest or it can be sad hilarious movie that name and I feel very happy and I enjoy and my also.
Giám khảo
Do you think you can make other people laugh?
Thí sinh
Yes, it is easy for me because I have a great sense of humour and and I am a good in polling other people's legs. That's why I feel I can make others people laugh because it is important to me to make them happy.
Giám khảo
Do you like to watch funny movies?
Thí sinh
Not all the time, but often times I like to watch funny movies because it changed my move and makes me energetic and boost my happiness and I feel productive throughout the day when I watch hilarious movies.
What do you think laughter means to daily life?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, use 'laughter' instead of 'laughings' and 'reduces' instead of 'reduce'. Also, keep your sentences clear and concise, and avoid repeating similar words like 'happy' and 'joyful' together.
Ví dụ: Laughter plays a crucial role in daily life because it reduces stress and boosts happiness. For instance, when I share jokes with my family or friends, I feel more energetic and cheerful.
When was the last time you laughed?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and correct sentence structure. Avoid confusing phrases and try to give a clear answer with specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.
Ví dụ: The last time I laughed was last weekend when I watched a hilarious movie with my friends. It was very funny, and I really enjoyed the time with them.
Do you think you can make other people laugh?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Improve your grammar and vocabulary. Instead of 'polling other people's legs', use 'teasing' or 'joking with' friends. Also, avoid repeating words and try to make your sentences more natural and fluent.
Ví dụ: Yes, I can easily make others laugh because I have a great sense of humour and enjoy joking with my friends. Making people happy is very important to me.
Do you like to watch funny movies?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'it changes my mood' instead of 'changed my move'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
Ví dụ: I don't watch funny movies all the time, but often I enjoy them because they change my mood, make me energetic, and boost my happiness. After watching, I feel productive throughout the day.
× Well, laughings play a crucial role in a daily life.
✓ Well, laughter plays a crucial role in daily life.
The word 'laughings' is incorrect as 'laughter' is an uncountable noun and should be singular. Also, 'a daily life' is incorrect; 'daily life' does not need an article here.
× It reduce stress and boost happiness.
✓ It reduces stress and boosts happiness.
The subject 'It' is third person singular, so the verbs should be in third person singular form with an 's' at the end: 'reduces' and 'boosts'.
× Well, laughings play a crucial role in a daily life.
✓ Well, laughter plays a crucial role in daily life.
The phrase 'a daily life' is incorrect because 'daily life' is a general concept and does not require the indefinite article 'a'.
× For example, when I am with my family or friends, sharing jokes makes me more energetic and happy and joyful.
✓ For example, when I am with my family or friends, sharing jokes makes me feel more energetic, happy, and joyful.
The verb 'makes' should be followed by 'me feel' to correctly express the effect. Also, commas are needed to separate adjectives in a list.
× Well, it was the time of last weekend when I won't add this name with my friends to watch the world's funniest or it can be sad hilarious movie that name and I feel very happy and I enjoy and my also.
✓ Well, it was last weekend when I went with my friends to watch the world's funniest or maybe a sad hilarious movie, and I felt very happy and enjoyed it as well.
The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'won't add this name' is unclear and incorrect; 'went' is the correct past tense verb for the action; 'feel' should be 'felt' to match past tense; 'enjoy' should be 'enjoyed'. The sentence structure is also corrected for clarity.
× Yes, it is easy for me because I have a great sense of humour and and I am a good in polling other people's legs.
✓ Yes, it is easy for me because I have a great sense of humour and I am good at pulling other people's legs.
The phrase 'a good in polling' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'good at pulling'. Also, 'polling' is a typo for 'pulling' in this context.
× That's why I feel I can make others people laugh because it is important to me to make them happy.
✓ That's why I feel I can make other people laugh because it is important to me to make them happy.
The phrase 'others people' is incorrect; the correct form is 'other people'.
× Not all the time, but often times I like to watch funny movies because it changed my move and makes me energetic and boost my happiness and I feel productive throughout the day when I watch hilarious movies.
✓ Not all the time, but often I like to watch funny movies because they change my mood, make me energetic, boost my happiness, and I feel productive throughout the day when I watch hilarious movies.
The phrase 'changed my move' is incorrect; it should be 'change my mood'. Also, 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject 'movies'. 'Often times' is better as 'often'.