Laughing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、内容がやや繰り返しで具体性に欠けています。より自然で効果的な回答にするために、笑いが日常生活に与える具体的な効果や理由を明確に述べ、冗長な表現を避けましょう。

Ví dụ: I think laughter plays a vital role in daily life because it helps reduce stress and improves our mood, especially during busy workdays when we often feel overwhelmed.

Gợi ý: 回答に多くのためらいや繰り返しがあり、意味がやや不明瞭です。質問に対して明確かつ簡潔に答え、具体的な状況や理由を述べることで、より効果的な回答になります。

Ví dụ: The last time I laughed was a few minutes ago when I watched a funny video online to relieve my stress from preparing for the English exam.

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法や語彙の誤りがあり、内容もやや曖昧です。より自然な表現を使い、具体的な例や理由を明確に述べることで、説得力のある回答にしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe I can make others laugh. For instance, at work, I often share funny stories or jokes with my colleagues, which helps create a positive and friendly atmosphere.

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、内容も混乱しています。質問に対して明確で簡潔に答え、具体的な理由や好きな映画の説明を自然な英語で述べましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy watching funny movies, especially comedies like 'Back to the Future,' because they help me relax and forget about my stress.

× I definitely believe that laughing is very essential in busy daily lives.

✓ I definitely believe that laughing is very essential in busy daily life.

The phrase 'daily lives' is plural, but the context refers to daily life in general, which is uncountable and singular. Using 'daily life' is more appropriate here.

× That's mainly because when I work hard on weekdays, we always forget laughing.

✓ That's mainly because when I work hard on weekdays, we always forget to laugh.

The verb 'forget' is usually followed by the infinitive form 'to laugh' when referring to an action that should be done but is not. Using 'forget laughing' is incorrect here.

× Umm, actually I tried to laugh, uh, two minutes ago, uh, because, uh, I want to relive my stress and anxiety, uh, overtaking, uh, English exams and uh, so I have to adjust right now.

✓ Umm, actually I tried to laugh, uh, two minutes ago, uh, because, uh, I wanted to relieve my stress and anxiety, uh, from taking, uh, English exams and, uh, so I have to adjust right now.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Want' should be 'wanted' to match 'tried' and 'relive' is a misspelling of 'relieve'. Also, 'overtaking' should be 'taking' in this context.

× Yes, I'm confident that I'm good at making other people laugh. For example, in my workplace I always try to talk favorite and interesting matters and make colleagues laugh because it can make good atmosphere.

✓ Yes, I'm confident that I'm good at making other people laugh. For example, in my workplace I always try to talk about favorite and interesting matters and make colleagues laugh because it can create a good atmosphere.

The verb 'talk' requires the preposition 'about' when referring to topics. Also, 'make good atmosphere' is incorrect; it should be 'create a good atmosphere'.

× Yes, I prefer watching funny movies, for example, comedies or uh, all the science fictions, uh, which was filled with uh, wisdom and weight.

✓ Yes, I prefer watching funny movies, for example, comedies or, uh, all the science fiction, uh, which are filled with, uh, wisdom and wit.

'Science fiction' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'science fictions'. Also, 'was' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject. 'Weight' is likely a mistake for 'wit'.

× That's mainly because I can't believe my stress of watching such a funny movies and my favorite movies was Back to the Future.

✓ That's mainly because I can't relieve my stress from watching such funny movies and my favorite movie was Back to the Future.

'A funny movies' is incorrect because 'movies' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'my favorite movies was' is incorrect; it should be 'my favorite movie was' to match singular subject and verb agreement.