Laughing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are minor grammatical errors such as 'reduce' instead of 'reduces'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly, for example, 'because' and 'therefore'.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, laughter is a clear sign of happiness and reflects a healthy state of mind. It plays an important role in daily life because it reduces stress and brings people closer together. Therefore, when we laugh, we feel more positive and enjoy life more fully.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but contains a typo ('from' instead of 'fun') and could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer linking words. Also, try to avoid minor mistakes and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

Ví dụ: I think the last time I laughed was yesterday when I went to the Botanical Garden with my best friends. We had a picnic there and flew kites, which was really fun. Moreover, one of my friends is very interested in plants and shared some funny stories about botany, which made us all laugh a lot.

Gợi ý: There are some errors such as 'not coming girl' which seems to be a mistake. Try to use clearer expressions and avoid repetition like 'in life' twice. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'moreover' appropriately to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do, because I am a cheerful person and positive about almost everything. I can always find amusing things around me and share these stories with my friends. Moreover, I can tell some jokes that make other people laugh.

Gợi ý: Your answer is too long and lacks clear sentence structure. Try to break it into shorter sentences and use linking words to improve clarity. Also, avoid redundancy such as 'more while watching movies'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. In fact, I am quite a big fan of movies, and comedies are my favorite. They always make me laugh and help me to relax after a stressful day. Watching funny movies really lifts my spirits and improves my mood, which is why I enjoy them so much.

× It plays an important role in daily life because it reduce stress and brings people closer together.

✓ It plays an important role in daily life because it reduces stress and brings people closer together.

The verb 'reduce' should be in the third person singular form 'reduces' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× We had a picnic there and flew kites, which was really from.

✓ We had a picnic there and flew kites, which was really fun.

The word 'from' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'fun' to describe the enjoyable experience. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.

× Yes I do, since I am not coming girl and am positive in almost everything in life, so I can always find amusing things in life.

✓ Yes, I do, since I am not a boring girl and am positive about almost everything in life, so I can always find amusing things in life.

The phrase 'not coming girl' is incorrect; it should be 'not a boring girl'. Also, 'positive in' should be 'positive about'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and prepositions.

× Yes I do, since I am not coming girl and am positive in almost everything in life, so I can always find amusing things in life.

✓ Yes, I do, since I am not a boring girl and am positive about almost everything in life, so I can always find amusing things in life.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'positive'; the correct preposition is 'about'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.

× Yes, I do in fact am quite a big fan of movies and comedies are my favorite because they always make me laugh and help me to relax after a stressful day more while watching movies can really lift my spirits and improve my mood which is why I enjoy them so much.

✓ Yes, I do. In fact, I am quite a big fan of movies, and comedies are my favorite because they always make me laugh and help me to relax after a stressful day. Watching movies can really lift my spirits and improve my mood, which is why I enjoy them so much.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper punctuation and conjunctions, making it confusing. Breaking it into shorter sentences and adding commas improves clarity and readability. This is a sentence structure error.