Laughing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 어휘 선택에서 많은 오류가 있으며 문장이 흐름이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 먼저 핵심 문장(topic sentence)을 명확히 하고, 1~2개의 구체적 이유를 연결어(so, because, therefore 등)로 이어 자연스럽게 말하세요. 예: ‘Laughter is important because it reduces stress’ 같은 간단 명료한 주제로 시작한 뒤, ‘for example’나 ‘also’를 써서 구체적 상황을 덧붙이세요. 발음과 문장 연결(예: ‘we need to try to laugh more’)에도 신경 쓰세요.

Ví dụ: Laughter is very important in daily life because it helps reduce stress and lift our mood. For example, after a stressful day at work, laughing with my family makes me feel more relaxed. Also, laughter can bring people closer together, so I try to find small things to laugh about every day.

Gợi ý: 내용이 중복되고 문법적 오류(시제, 동사형)와 발음으로 이해하기 어렵습니다. 질문은 특정한 시점을 요구하므로 ‘specific time’으로 답을 시작하세요(예: ‘This morning’). 그 다음 간단한 이유와 짧은 예시를 연결어(with/because/so)로 설명하세요. 불필요한 반복은 피하세요.

Ví dụ: I laughed this morning when my son told me a funny story. Because he was so excited, he made a silly face and we both laughed a lot. It really cheered me up before I started my day.

Gợi ý: 의미 전달이 불분명하고 핵심 의견(topic sentence)이 약합니다. 먼저 간단히 ‘Yes/No’를 말한 뒤 이유를 하나 또는 두 개 제시하세요. ‘if I get closer’ 같은 표현은 ‘if I get to know them well’으로 바꾸고, 예시를 하나 들어 구체화하세요. 문장 수는 2~3문장으로 유지하세요.

Ví dụ: I think I can make some people laugh, but not everyone. If I get to know someone well, I usually use funny stories about my family to make them smile. For example, I often imitate my son’s funny gestures and that always gets a laugh.

Gợi ý: 의견은 분명하지만 잦은 말더듬과 문장 불완전이 있습니다. 명확한 주제문(Yes/No + 이유)을 먼저 말한 뒤, 한두 개의 구체적 이유와 예시를 연결어(so, because)로 이어 설명하세요. 불필요한 반복을 줄이고 어휘를 정확히 사용하세요(예: ‘action movies relieve my stress’).

Ví dụ: No, I don't really enjoy funny movies. I prefer action movies because they are exciting and help me relax after a long day. For example, a fast-paced action film keeps me focused and takes my mind off problems, so I feel less stressed afterward.

× I think Lafayette is very important our daily life because love to give gave us some happiness because I think in our daily life mostly very struggle.

✓ I think laughter is very important in our daily life because it gives us some happiness, especially since life is often a struggle.

The sentence has multiple pronoun and noun errors: 'Lafayette' is a misspelling of 'laughter' and 'important our daily life' is missing the preposition 'in' (preposition error, but fixed here together). 'Love to give gave us' mixes forms; correct is 'it gives us' using the pronoun 'it' to refer to 'laughter' and the simple present 'gives'. 'Mostly very struggle' is ungrammatical; correct phrasing is 'life is often a struggle'. Suggestion: ensure correct noun spelling, use 'it' for things, include necessary prepositions like 'in', and use simple present for general truths.

× So I think we needed to more effort for laughter more.

✓ So I think we need to make more effort to laugh more.

Original uses past form 'needed' incorrectly for a present general suggestion (should be present tense 'need' — Present tense issue), and 'to more effort' is incorrect collocation. The structure 'make an effort to do something' is correct. Suggestion: use present tense for general statements and the verb phrase 'make more effort to laugh'.

× I always try to laughter a lot because I think it is it's influenced by my son.

✓ I always try to laugh a lot because I think I'm influenced by my son.

'laughter' is a noun while context requires the verb 'laugh' (verb form issue: verb + -ing or base form). 'It is it's influenced' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'I'm influenced' or 'I am influenced'. Suggestion: choose correct verb form 'laugh' and avoid redundant pronouns; use 'I am influenced by...' to show cause.

× So this morning I also left, left. Left because of my son, because my son was a priority.

✓ So this morning I also left because of my son, because my son was a priority.

Repeating 'left' appears to be hesitation; keep a single past tense 'left' which is appropriate for a completed morning action. 'Was a priority' is acceptable to explain reason. Suggestion: remove unnecessary repetition and keep past tense consistent for completed actions.

× So we very laughed.

✓ So we laughed a lot.

'Very laughed' is ungrammatical because 'very' cannot modify a verb directly. Use an adverb phrase like 'a lot' or 'very much' after the verb: 'laughed a lot.' Suggestion: use appropriate adverbs to modify verbs.

× I think it is very difficult, difficult aim to move because I'm very, I think I'm very interpreted person.

✓ I think it is very difficult to make people laugh because I'm, I think, a very reserved person.

The sentence mixes incorrect words: 'aim to move' and 'interpreted person' are wrong choices. 'Make people laugh' is the correct verb phrase. 'Reserved' (or 'introverted') fits meaning. 'I'm, I think,' indicates hesitation; keep one. Suggestion: use 'to make people laugh' and choose suitable adjective like 'reserved' or 'introverted.'

× So, but I, if I, if I get closer, I can make, I can make a left, I can make.

✓ But if I get closer, I can make them laugh.

'Make a left' is nonsense here; the intended meaning is 'make them laugh.' Replace with correct object pronoun 'them' and verb 'laugh'. Remove repetition. Suggestion: use clear subject/object pronouns and the verb 'laugh' when referring to causing laughter.

× Actually, I don't much like funny movies.

✓ Actually, I don't really like funny movies much.

'Don't much like' is awkward; common patterns are 'don't really like' or 'don't like... much.' Reordering to 'don't really like funny movies' or 'don't like funny movies much' is natural. Suggestion: use 'really' with negative verbs or place 'much' after the object.

× Umm, but I don't know why. I just. I really like just. I think action movies because when when I watch the actual movie I feel it's relieve my stress so I really enjoy what.

✓ But I don't know why. I just really like action movies because when I watch action movies they relieve my stress, so I really enjoy them.

The original has fragmented sentences and incorrect conjunctions: 'I just. I really like just.' is fragmented. 'Actual movie' likely means 'action movie' (spelling). 'I feel it's relieve my stress' mixes structures; correct is 'they relieve my stress.' 'So I really enjoy what' is incomplete; finish with 'them.' Suggestion: combine fragments into complete sentences, use plural subject 'they' for movies, and use correct verb 'relieve' with object 'my stress.'