Road— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, the roads near my home are usually very busy because of the large population, which often leads to traffic jams.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，且句子结构较复杂。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和冠词的使用，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, people often cross the roads in my city because there are many shopping malls and stores, so pedestrians need to cross to reach their destinations.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清晰，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意冠词和形容词的正确使用，提升表达准确性。

Ví dụ: I live in a new city that was built about 10 years ago, so the infrastructure and roads are well maintained and of high quality.

Gợi ý: 回答较简短，表达重复且缺少连接词。建议丰富内容，使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think the government should expand the sidewalks because this would help ensure pedestrians' safety.

× Yes, roads in my vicinity are quite busy due to the large population which always cause the traffic jam.

✓ Yes, roads in my vicinity are quite busy due to the large population which always causes traffic jams.

这里的主语是单数的"population"，谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式"causes"。另外，"traffic jam"应使用复数形式"traffic jams"，因为交通堵塞通常是多次发生的情况。

× Yes, people cross the road in the city where I live because there are many shopping malls and stores along the city, so pedestrians needed to cross the road to arrive the destinations.

✓ Yes, people cross the road in the city where I live because there are many shopping malls and stores throughout the city, so pedestrians need to cross the road to reach their destinations.

"along the city"用法不当，应该用"throughout the city"表示遍布城市。"needed"时态错误，应为一般现在时"need"，因为描述的是习惯性动作。"arrive the destinations"搭配错误，正确用法是"reach their destinations"。

× I live in the new city which was constructed about 10 years ago, so the infrastructure and roads there are well maintained an high-quality.

✓ I live in the new city which was constructed about 10 years ago, so the infrastructure and roads there are well maintained and high quality.

"an high-quality"中冠词"an"使用错误，且"high-quality"作为形容词短语修饰名词时不需要连字符，且前面应有连词"and"连接两个形容词。

× I hope the government can expand the the sidewalks which will help ensure the safety of the pedestrians.

✓ I hope the government can expand the sidewalks, which will help ensure the safety of pedestrians.

句中"the the sidewalks"重复，应删除一个"the"。"the pedestrians"中冠词"the"可省略，因为泛指行人。句子中应在"sidewalks"后加逗号，引导非限制性定语从句。