RoadPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are the roads in the area where you live busy?

Thí sinh

Yes, the roads here are quite busy almost all the time because. This is a vibrant city.

Giám khảo

Do people cross the road in the city where you live?

Thí sinh

He is near the traffic signals. There are certain patterns which you can press and wait till the. Signal shows green for the.

Giám khảo

How is the condition of the roads in your city?

Thí sinh

Here's the roads are perfect and there almost clean all the time and yeah, it's men did really well.

Giám khảo

Do you think the roads in your city need improvement?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think it needs any improvement because the condition is really good and it's not causing any trouble to have both the drivers and the pedestrians.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Are the roads in the area where you live busy?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Try to give a complete and coherent answer by avoiding sentence fragments and explaining your reasons clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, the roads in my area are quite busy almost all the time because it is a vibrant city with many people commuting daily.

Do people cross the road in the city where you live?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Make sure to answer the question directly and clearly. Use complete sentences and explain the process or situation with linking words for clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, people usually cross the road near traffic signals. They press a button and wait until the signal turns green before crossing safely.

How is the condition of the roads in your city?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Focus on clear pronunciation and grammar. Provide specific details and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: The roads in my city are in excellent condition and are almost always clean because the authorities maintain them well.

Do you think the roads in your city need improvement?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think the roads need any improvement because they are in good condition and function well for both drivers and pedestrians.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, the roads here are quite busy almost all the time because. This is a vibrant city.

Yes, the roads here are quite busy almost all the time because this is a vibrant city.

The original sentence incorrectly splits a single thought into two fragments by placing a period after 'because'. This results in a sentence fragment. The correction combines the two parts into one complete sentence, properly connecting the cause and effect.

Sentence structure errors

× He is near the traffic signals.

People cross near the traffic signals.

The original sentence uses 'He' which is unclear and does not answer the question about people crossing the road. The correction clarifies the subject and relates directly to the question, improving sentence structure and clarity.

Sentence structure errors

× There are certain patterns which you can press and wait till the. Signal shows green for the.

There are certain buttons which you can press and wait until the signal shows green for you.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear, ending abruptly after 'till the.' The correction completes the sentence, clarifies the subject, and improves coherence by specifying 'buttons' and 'for you'.

Singular and plural issue

× Here's the roads are perfect and there almost clean all the time and yeah, it's men did really well.

The roads here are perfect and they are almost clean all the time, and yeah, it's maintained really well.

The original sentence has incorrect use of 'Here's' instead of 'The roads here', 'there' instead of 'they are', and 'men did' which is incorrect. The correction fixes singular/plural issues and replaces incorrect words to make the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× No, I don't think it needs any improvement because the condition is really good and it's not causing any trouble to have both the drivers and the pedestrians.

No, I don't think it needs any improvement because the condition is really good and it's not causing any trouble for either the drivers or the pedestrians.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'to have both the drivers and the pedestrians' which is awkward and unclear. The correction uses proper prepositions and conjunctions to clearly express that the roads are not causing trouble for both groups.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
CleanBlank; Pure; Virtuous; Neat
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
PerfectIdeal; Flawless; Exact; Absolute; Improve
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