Perfume— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều câu không hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với chủ đề.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like perfume very much. For example, I often use floral scents because they make me feel fresh and confident throughout the day.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị ngắt quãng và thiếu sự liên kết giữa các câu. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I use perfume every day. I believe that wearing a floral scent makes me feel comfortable and more confident when I meet other people.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng đại từ phù hợp và cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely buy perfume as a gift for my family and friends because I believe they also like perfumes and enjoy the fragrances I love. Therefore, it is easy for me to choose a gift.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think some perfumes are expensive. Usually, perfumes made by professionals from famous high-end brands cost more and are less common.

× Yes, I admit that I'm a fan of her food.

✓ Yes, I admit that I'm a fan of its scent.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used to refer to perfume. The correct pronoun should be 'its' because perfume is an object, not a person.

× So for example, I like to use flower bathroom because it makes me feel filling in great form throughout the date.

✓ So for example, I like to use floral perfume because it makes me feel great throughout the day.

The phrase 'flower bathroom' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'floral perfume' to correctly describe the scent. Also, 'filling in great form throughout the date' is awkward and incorrect; 'feel great throughout the day' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I don't so. Mute. It also happy if you relaxed when I.

✓ I don't know. It also makes me happy and relaxed.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper sentence structure and verbs. The corrected sentence provides a clear and grammatically correct expression of the intended meaning.

× Yes, I use my perfume of every day.

✓ Yes, I use my perfume every day.

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used here. The correct phrase is 'every day' without 'of' to indicate frequency.

× I believe that. If I have a. Floral scenes on my body it will. It will make me feel comfortable and more confident when I come across anybody.

✓ I believe that if I have a floral scent on my body, it will make me feel comfortable and more confident when I meet anyone.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary periods. Also, 'scenes' is a misspelling of 'scents'. The corrected sentence is complete and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I am definitely. We buy perfume as a gift to my beloved family members and friends because I believe that they also like perfume like me and they also enjoy fragrance that I love.

✓ Yes, I definitely buy perfume as a gift for my beloved family members and friends because I believe that they also like perfume like me and enjoy the fragrances that I love.

The pronoun 'We' is incorrectly used instead of 'I'. Also, 'to' should be 'for' when giving gifts. The sentence is corrected for pronoun and preposition usage.

× Yes, I believe that there are some exclusive perfume and they are. Expensive.

✓ Yes, I believe that there are some exclusive perfumes and they are expensive.

The noun 'perfume' should be plural 'perfumes' to agree with 'some'. Also, the sentence is fragmented; combining into one sentence improves clarity.

× I believe that perfumes which is which are corrupted by professionals in famous high end brands will be more expensive and less area.

✓ I believe that perfumes which are created by professionals in famous high-end brands will be more expensive and rare.

The phrase 'corrupted by professionals' is incorrect; it should be 'created by professionals'. Also, 'less area' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'rare'. The sentence is corrected for pronoun agreement and word choice.