Perfume— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like perfumes, especially those with soft and subtle fragrances. I usually prefer light scents because they are pleasant and not overwhelming. For example, I often buy floral or citrus perfumes that are suitable for daily use.

Gợi ý: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Please try to express your ideas clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I use perfume every day because it helps me feel confident and improves my personality. Moreover, wearing a nice fragrance makes a good impression when I meet other people.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some good points but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your ideas. Also, be specific and avoid confusing expressions.

Ví dụ: In my country, giving perfume as a gift is not a common tradition. However, some people appreciate it. Therefore, I would buy perfume as a gift only if I know the person likes it and has wanted it for a long time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Please try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid spelling mistakes and be specific about your preferences.

Ví dụ: In my country, there are both affordable and expensive perfumes. I usually prefer to buy perfumes that have a pleasant fragrance rather than focusing on their price.

× I like perfumes which has a soft fragments are usually by a lot of perfumes in the little thing.

✓ I like perfumes which have soft fragments and are usually used by many people in small amounts.

The sentence has singular and plural mismatches: 'perfumes which has' should be 'perfumes which have' because 'perfumes' is plural. Also, 'soft fragments are usually by a lot of perfumes in the little thing' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it is corrected to 'soft fragments and are usually used by many people in small amounts' to make sense and maintain plural agreement.

× I like perfumes which has a soft fragments are usually by a lot of perfumes in the little thing.

✓ I like perfumes which have soft fragments and are usually used by many people in small amounts.

The original sentence is structurally incorrect and confusing. It combines multiple ideas without proper conjunctions or verb forms. The correction separates ideas properly and uses conjunctions to improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, in my daily life I use perfumes because I think that with the help of made my personality got more animals and and also I will be I become. So please send in in front of every person.

✓ Yes, in my daily life I use perfumes because I think they help improve my personality and also make me confident. So I wear them in front of every person.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'made my personality got more animals' and 'I will be I become'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and restructures the sentence for grammatical correctness and coherence.

× So please send in in front of every person.

✓ So I wear them in front of every person.

The phrase 'please send in in front of every person' is incorrect and unclear. The preposition 'in front of' is correct, but the verb 'send' is inappropriate here. The correction uses 'wear' to match the context of using perfume and corrects the preposition usage.

× If a person wants to perfume from along time then I will buy perfume for messages for them.

✓ If a person wants perfume for a long time, then I will buy perfume as a gift for them.

The phrase 'wants to perfume' is incorrect; 'wants perfume' is correct because 'perfume' is uncountable here. Also, 'from along time' should be 'for a long time'. 'Messages' is incorrect in this context and replaced with 'as a gift' to convey the intended meaning.

× If a person wants to perfume from along time then I will buy perfume for messages for them.

✓ If a person wants perfume for a long time, then I will buy perfume as a gift for them.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect in 'from along time'; it should be 'for a long time' to indicate duration. Also, 'for messages' is incorrect and replaced with 'as a gift' to fit the context.

× Well in my country there are both Friday off perfumes, both affordable an expensive I mostly prefer to buy but knows which has a great friends instead of watching their prizes.

✓ Well, in my country there are both affordable and expensive perfumes. I mostly prefer to buy perfumes which have great fragrances instead of focusing on their prices.

The phrase 'Friday off perfumes' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'affordable and expensive perfumes'. 'Knows which has a great friends' is incorrect; corrected to 'perfumes which have great fragrances' to maintain plural agreement and correct word choice. 'Watching their prizes' is corrected to 'focusing on their prices' for clarity.