Perfume— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. To improve, focus on using correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your ideas are fully expressed. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy wearing perfume because it improves my mood and boosts my confidence. Additionally, it helps me create a positive impression on others, which I find important.

Gợi ý: Your response is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. To improve, use clearer sentence structures and correct verb forms. Also, use linking words like 'because' or 'and' to connect your ideas logically. Try to be more concise and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I use perfume daily because it helps me feel fresh and confident. Moreover, at my workplace, my colleagues often compliment me on my fragrance, which I find very enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and sentence flow. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily and ensure your sentences are complete. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often buy perfume as a gift because it is both convenient and luxurious. However, I always consider the recipient's preferences and allergies to ensure the gift is suitable and memorable.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and contains several grammatical errors. To improve, organise your ideas logically and use complete sentences. Avoid vague phrases like 'perfume is an object' and explain your points clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, perfumes are quite expensive in my country due to high inflation. Authentic and genuine perfumes cost a lot, making them unaffordable for many people. As a result, many buy cheaper fake perfumes, although their quality is often poor.

× Yes, I'm fond of wearing perfume because it improves my mood and also I can enjoy when I wearing them.

✓ Yes, I'm fond of wearing perfume because it improves my mood and also I can enjoy it when I wear it.

The phrase 'when I wearing them' is incorrect because 'wearing' is a present participle and cannot be used directly after 'when I'. The correct form is the simple present tense 'wear' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'them' should be replaced with 'it' to refer to perfume, which is uncountable.

× It's can help me to raise my confidence and it produce positive impression to others.

✓ It can help me to raise my confidence and it produces a positive impression on others.

The phrase 'It's can help' is incorrect because 'can' is a modal verb and should not be preceded by 'is'. Also, 'produce' should be in the third person singular form 'produces' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Additionally, 'positive impression to others' should be 'a positive impression on others' to use the correct article and preposition.

× The other kinds of fragrances and I can.

✓ I also like other kinds of fragrances.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear structure. It seems the speaker wants to express liking other kinds of fragrances. The corrected sentence provides a complete and clear statement.

× Yes, it's really important for me to use perfume because it helps me to freshen up.

✓ Yes, it's really important for me to use perfume because it helps me freshen up.

The phrase 'helps me to freshen up' is grammatically acceptable, but in English, the verb 'help' is often followed directly by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Removing 'to' makes the sentence more natural.

× The other thing that I like to mention, it's a produce positive impression on others.

✓ Another thing I would like to mention is that it produces a positive impression on others.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses a proper structure to introduce an additional point and uses the correct verb form 'produces'.

× Since I go to my workplace, it's really important for me and most of my colleagues, my friend, give me compliments on my perfume.

✓ Since I go to my workplace, it's really important for me, and most of my colleagues and friends give me compliments on my perfume.

The phrase 'my friend' should be plural 'friends' to agree with 'most of my colleagues'. Also, commas are adjusted for clarity.

× Yes, I prefer to buy perfume as a gift because it's really convenient and it's a luxurious item.

✓ Yes, I prefer to buy perfume as a gift because it's really convenient and a luxurious item.

The phrase 'it's a luxurious item' is correct, but repeating 'it's' is unnecessary. Removing the second 'it's' improves sentence flow.

× When others use this perfume, it's practical for them and also it's memorable. Memorable for them.

✓ When others use this perfume, it's practical for them and also memorable.

The phrase 'Memorable for them' is a fragment and redundant. Combining the ideas into one sentence improves clarity.

× We should consider their taste and favorite.

✓ We should consider their taste and preferences.

The word 'favorite' is an adjective and cannot stand alone as a noun here. 'Preferences' is the correct noun to express what is meant.

× Most people have Some people have a allergy and they get a headache, so it's really important to care.

✓ Some people have allergies and they get headaches, so it's really important to be careful.

The phrase 'Most people have Some people have' is contradictory and confusing. 'A allergy' is incorrect; it should be 'an allergy' or 'allergies' in plural. Also, 'get a headache' is better as 'get headaches' for generality. 'It's really important to care' is vague; 'to be careful' is clearer.

× Since we leave a country, everything is really expensive and inflation rate is high.

✓ Since we live in a country, everything is really expensive and the inflation rate is high.

The verb 'leave' is incorrect here; it should be 'live' to indicate residence. Also, 'inflation rate' needs the definite article 'the'.

× In my country, perfume is an object.

✓ In my country, perfume is an item.

The phrase 'perfume is an object' is awkward; 'item' is more appropriate for something that can be bought and sold.

× They are really expensive.

✓ They are really expensive.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× Especially authentic and genuine source of perfumes are expensive and it's not affordable for people to buy them.

✓ Especially authentic and genuine perfumes are expensive and not affordable for people to buy.

The phrase 'authentic and genuine source of perfumes' is awkward; 'authentic and genuine perfumes' is clearer. Also, 'it's not affordable' should be 'not affordable' to agree with the plural subject.

× There are lots of fake perfume, they are not expensive and they taste.

✓ There are lots of fake perfumes; they are not expensive and they have a strong scent.

The phrase 'fake perfume' should be plural 'fake perfumes'. The sentence is a run-on and needs to be separated properly. 'They taste' is incomplete; likely the speaker meant 'they have a strong scent' or similar.