Perfume— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding vague phrases and grammar mistakes. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or feelings. For example, explain why you like the perfume and how it makes you feel.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like perfume very much because it helps me express my personality. My favorite perfume is called 'Smell of Roses' because it has a fresh and floral scent that makes me feel happy and confident.

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating the same ideas and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about your habits and feelings.

Ví dụ: Yes, I use perfume almost every day because it makes me feel fresh and attractive. For example, I often wear 'Smell of Roses' when I go outside, and I enjoy the compliments I receive on my scent.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity by using correct verb forms and sentence structures. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't buy perfume as a gift because I am not sure if others like the same scent as I do. However, if I know their favorite perfume, I would consider buying it for them.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to compare and contrast ideas clearly. Be specific about the types of alternatives and their qualities.

Ví dụ: Yes, original perfumes are usually expensive. However, there are many affordable alternatives, such as tube perfumes or body sprays, which may not last as long but still smell nice.

× I really enjoy it and it's shows really good my emotions and yeah.

✓ I really enjoy it and it really shows my emotions well.

The phrase 'it's shows' is incorrect because 'shows' is a verb that should not be used with 'it's' (it is). The correct form is 'it shows'. Also, 'really good my emotions' is awkward; 'really shows my emotions well' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I like smell of roses and smell of goods.

✓ I like the smell of roses and the smell of goods.

The phrase 'like smell of roses' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'smell'. In English, when referring to a specific smell, 'the' is required before 'smell of'.

× I really like when I go to the street or somewhere and I can show up my smell everywhere.

✓ I really like it when I go out or somewhere and I can show my scent everywhere.

The phrase 'go to the street' is unnatural; 'go out' or 'go somewhere' is better. Also, 'show up my smell' is incorrect; 'show my scent' or 'leave my scent' is more appropriate. 'Show up' is not used with 'smell' in this context.

× No, because I don't know if other people likes the smell what I like.

✓ No, because I don't know if other people like the smell that I like.

The verb 'likes' should be 'like' because the subject 'other people' is plural. Also, 'the smell what I like' is incorrect; it should be 'the smell that I like'.

× So I think everyone needs to buy a perfume in their own.

✓ So I think everyone needs to buy a perfume on their own.

The phrase 'in their own' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'on their own' meaning independently.

× But if I knew what kind of perfume they like then I can buy.

✓ But if I knew what kind of perfume they liked, then I could buy it.

This is a conditional sentence. The correct form is the second conditional: 'If I knew... they liked... I could buy'. 'Can' should be 'could' to match the past tense in the if-clause.

× Yes, I think the original perfumes are really expensive, but there is many other alternatives which we can use, for example tube perfumes or another style of perfumes, but it is not least as long as the original.

✓ Yes, I think the original perfumes are really expensive, but there are many other alternatives we can use, for example tube perfumes or other styles of perfumes, but they are not as long-lasting as the original.

'There is many other alternatives' should be 'there are many other alternatives' because 'alternatives' is plural. 'Another style of perfumes' should be 'other styles of perfumes' to agree in number. 'It is not least as long as the original' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'they are not as long-lasting as the original'.