Perfume— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repetition and irrelevant information. Focus on answering the question directly with clear and concise sentences. For example, avoid repeating words like 'I' and unrelated topics such as 'I like violin'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy wearing perfume because it makes me feel confident and fresh throughout the day. I also have a collection of different fragrances that I like to use depending on my mood.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and structure. Provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I use perfume daily. After completing my skincare routine and getting dressed, I apply perfume on my body and clothes, which helps me feel confident and fresh throughout the day.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: It depends on the person's taste. If I know that someone likes perfume and their preferences, I would consider buying it as a gift. Moreover, perfume is a versatile present suitable for many occasions.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and unclear phrasing. Use correct grammar and provide a clear, coherent answer with linking words to explain different opinions.

Ví dụ: It depends on personal choices. Some people believe that expensive perfumes are worth buying because they smell better and last longer, while others prefer less expensive options. So, it varies from person to person.

× I have a collection of different fragrances in my wardrobe.

✓ I have a collection of different fragrances in my wardrobe.

No correction needed for this sentence as the plural form 'fragrances' is correctly used to indicate multiple items in the collection.

× I I enjoy wearing perfume because it makes me me feel confident and fresh throughout the day and I have a collection of different fragrances in my wardrobe.

✓ I enjoy wearing perfume because it makes me feel confident and fresh throughout the day and I have a collection of different fragrances in my wardrobe.

The repetition of the pronoun 'I' and 'me' is incorrect and redundant. Removing the duplicates improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× After my skin routine, I dressed up I I apply for perfume on our dress, our body and it makes me me of confident and fresh throughout the day.

✓ After my skin routine, I dress up and apply perfume on my clothes and body, and it makes me feel confident and fresh throughout the day.

The sentence contains repeated pronouns and incorrect possessive pronouns ('our' instead of 'my'). Also, 'apply for perfume' is incorrect; it should be 'apply perfume'. The verb tense is adjusted to present simple to match habitual action.

× Moreover. It is.

✓ Moreover, it is.

The period after 'Moreover' should be a comma to correctly connect the sentence. However, the sentence is incomplete and unclear; it needs more context to be meaningful.

× If I know someone perfume or someone who likes perfume and their taste, I would prefer to buy perfume as a gift.

✓ If I know someone's perfume preference or someone who likes perfume and their taste, I would prefer to buy perfume as a gift.

The phrase 'someone perfume' is incorrect; it should be 'someone's perfume preference' to indicate possession. This clarifies the meaning and corrects the pronoun usage.

× Moreover, perfume is a versatile gift, so we can use it any any occasions and.

✓ Moreover, perfume is a versatile gift, so we can use it on any occasion.

The phrase 'any any occasions and' is redundant and incomplete. 'On any occasion' is the correct prepositional phrase to express this idea.

× Some people think prefer it is a worth to buy an expensive perfume because it smells but better and long lasting.

✓ Some people think it is worth buying an expensive perfume because it smells better and lasts longer.

The phrase 'think prefer it is a worth to buy' is incorrect and redundant. The correct expression is 'think it is worth buying'. Also, 'smells but better' should be 'smells better', and 'long lasting' should be 'lasts longer' to correctly use comparative forms and verb agreement.

× Other preferences are less expensive perfumes perfumes.

✓ Others prefer less expensive perfumes.

The phrase 'Other preferences are less expensive perfumes perfumes' is incorrect and repetitive. 'Others prefer less expensive perfumes' correctly uses plural forms and clarifies the meaning.