Perfume— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「I am quite sensitive and smells」は不明瞭で、「I am quite sensitive to smells」のように修正が必要です。また、文をもう少し自然で流暢にするために、接続詞を使って理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Actually, I do not like perfume because I am quite sensitive to smells, especially sweet fragrances, which I find overwhelming.

Gợi ý: 回答は簡潔で直接的ですが、より自然な表現にするために、理由をつなげる接続詞を使うと良いでしょう。また、「bothersome」という単語は少し硬い印象があるため、より日常的な表現を使うと自然です。

Ví dụ: No, I don't use perfume daily because it's hard for me to find a scent I like, and wearing it often feels uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答は内容が少し混乱しています。最初の「Maybe」と「No」が矛盾しているため、どちらかに統一しましょう。また、理由を明確にし、文をつなげる接続詞を使うことで、より論理的で自然な回答になります。

Ví dụ: I probably won't buy perfume as a gift because most of my friends don't wear it. Instead, I usually give them room fragrances, which they prefer.

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりにくく、文法や語順の誤りがあります。数字の表現や引用の仕方を整理し、理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげることで、より自然な流れになります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think perfumes are expensive. Some bottles cost over 30,000 yen, and although people say one bottle can last for half a year, I still feel they are costly.

× Actually I do not like perfume because I am quite sensitive and smells.

✓ Actually I do not like perfume because I am quite sensitive to smells.

The phrase 'sensitive and smells' is incorrect. It should be 'sensitive to smells' to correctly express sensitivity towards odors. This is a preposition usage issue, but since 'sensitive' requires 'to', it is best corrected here.

× Especially I do not like fragrance that have sweet smells.

✓ Especially I do not like fragrances that have sweet smells.

The word 'fragrance' should be plural 'fragrances' because it refers to multiple types. Also, 'have' agrees with plural 'fragrances'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× It is difficult for me to find comfortable smells and wearing perfume is bothersome to me.

✓ It is difficult for me to find comfortable smells, and wearing perfume is bothersome to me.

The sentence is mostly correct, but a comma before 'and' improves clarity. 'Wearing' is correctly used as a gerund here.

× No, that's because most of my friends are not wearing perfumes.

✓ No, that's because most of my friends do not wear perfumes.

The present continuous 'are not wearing' is incorrect here because it implies an action happening now. The simple present 'do not wear' is appropriate for habitual actions.

× They have same opinions as me and I give them room fragrances instead of perfume.

✓ They have the same opinions as me, and I give them room fragrances instead of perfume.

The phrase 'same opinions' needs the definite article 'the' before 'same'. This is an article error combined with singular/plural usage.

× There are 30,000 or more expensive one in shop and someone says to me we can use one bottle for half of year but so it is not expensive but I don't think so.

✓ There are 30,000 or more expensive ones in the shop, and someone told me we can use one bottle for half a year, so it is not expensive, but I don't think so.

'One' should be plural 'ones' to agree with '30,000 or more'. 'In shop' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Says to me' is better as 'told me'. 'Half of year' should be 'half a year'. This sentence has multiple errors including singular/plural, article usage, and verb tense.